Writing Quality: 5☆ I don't count bad english or typos in these kind of reviews as they don't change the story, can always be edited and judging the authors english over small things like that is just unreasonable. Story Development: 5☆ Even before any real big story development is made you can sometimes tell that it is good, and this is the case here too. If in these 12 chapters there would have been a big change, it would have already been bad in stories like this, so it is already good that, while you can already look in the future a little in the first chapter, there is no big change yet. The 'introduction chapter' tells you that in the next chapter from now there will definitely be some development in the next chapter. In other words, the pace of the story is well done. Character Design: 5☆ Not much to say. In chapter 3 or 4 (I don't quite remember) we will be introduced to Ayane and we can already tell that she has a very special character and a very elaborate character design. Following that we get a glimpse of the reason for mc's attitude, which already hint on great character design for him. Later on in chapter 11 if I remember correctly, we get introduced to a student called Dracula as her surname. We also get a little explaination about the name and have a moment with her. While it was only speculation, I have made a comment at the end of the chapter that I have put my thoughts about her character in, and the fact that I was able to think of so many things already shows that she most likely also has a pretty special character on top of the bit that we already know. Somewhere we get a flashback to the prophecy and can see that even almost irrelevant background characters, such as the sage, don't lack personality, which is something I have only seen in 1 other novel for a just one character to be frank. If rating this 6☆ would be an option, I would choose it. Respect +1, sir author! Updating Stability: 4☆ My sense of time us very bad, but (correct me if I'm wrong) I am pretty sure that, even tho we got daily chapter (I think at least...), the time in which they get uploaded isn't uniform. World Backround: 5☆ Thank the god of fate, WE FINALLY GOT SOMETHING NEW AND AT LEAST A LITTLE ORIGINAL!!!

One of the best novels on webnovel. All the characters are so colorful , and memorable, the novel is a perfect slice of life rom com. The mc feels especially human compared to the generic mc you find in every fantasy novel here. I personally enjoyed watching life through the mc's perspective, and I love how i ended up relating to his indecisiveness, annoyances, and self doubt. As i think If i was in his place, i would feel the same emotions, and that made me feel the mc was truly alive. There's a gealthy bit of drama which is now overdone, as in high stakes. I even ended up feeling the tiredness the mc was feeling after going through his days full of twist and turns, but i didn't find it annoying. Some of his character interactions with others is simply relaxing and fun to read. The plot is nothing that special or jaw dropping, but the novel is centered around characters and their everyday life, and the author sure knows how to write a character that truly feels alive.

The book is amazing! the first chapter is hooks u up right away! I love the way he expresses the characters! Plot is good and it’s mostly like an anime! Keep going Author!

Read everything so far, due to that cover... Cough Cough Anyway, it's quite the good read, and quite interesting as well. Story is super B, and im already loving that loli vampire just after chapter 1. Author has a good imagination, and is able to tell a very good to read story. HOWEVER there's the problem of grammar, which often appears in conversations, in which the author isnt able to properply indicate if the MC or someone else is talking, or him thinking. grammar usually gets messed up when author tries to explain a conversation that is ongoing, especially in the first chapter. it rarely appears on the later chapters though, and mostly in the longer chapters. Im assuming the author is just tired from writing kekeke anyway, other that that, I really love the story this novel tells. All I need is more uploads! And please fix chapters one, or you might lose potential readers author sama! To anyone about to read this novel, read it! its really good, and only need some fixing in the long chapters. grammar, punctuations, and indications

A Wampire Loli, hmm though this seems a bit add but once you got to know that the author had a peculiar interest in Horror then you will understand that this is a new creation of his in a very interesting way. Every thought of this before, I ask all!

Okay..the first chap was so hooking, such a great star. The interactions are so funny, especially the main character. I bet the author is as funny too. Anyways, keep writing author cuz this is going into my library

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I didn't expect that story will be like this. In other words, I enjoy it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Keep on your writing to make your readers enjoy your story. There's nothing to say more.

The novel synopsis is quite a show. Ain't it? Anyways the grammar is good and the plot and everything else is also awesome! Keep writing and I'll keep reading... Waiting for more chapters