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AngelLily
AngelLilyLv143yr
2021-12-11 22:23

Okay..the first chap was so hooking, such a great star. The interactions are so funny, especially the main character. I bet the author is as funny too. Anyways, keep writing author cuz this is going into my library

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Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyAuthor

naw, can't say I'm funny like that uhuu

AngelLily
AngelLilyLv14

but how would you be able to write that, if you're not funny🤭

Little_Foxxy:naw, can't say I'm funny like that uhuu
Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyAuthor

umuu thank you AngelLily senpai

AngelLily:but how would you be able to write that, if you're not funny🤭
Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyAuthor

*AngelLily 'sensei' (because you're an author umu)

AngelLily
AngelLilyLv14

🤗🤭

Little_Foxxy:*AngelLily 'sensei' (because you're an author umu)
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