The fl seems interesting. I like the story so far. Unfortunately, the first few chapters are a bit confusing. Right off the bat, a major part of the story is missing! How the heck did she get pregnant? She transmigrated and found a cave where she passed out. There was a man cultivating somewhere hidden in the cave but other than a mysterious light that disappeared (which she didn't even notice). The two people never met! It's mentioned later that she was given an aphrodisiac, which makes no sense since the villains were trying to kill her by burning her. Why drug her? The story is good and has the potential to be a good read, but the author should really go back to the first few chapters and fill in the missing parts. It doesn't need to be graphic, but at least explain what happened in the cave.
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