World building in this novel is okay but as far as story development and characters are concerned it's not great. I honestly don't really like the FL and ML. The FL starts off with an independent personality but later as she gets more entangled with the ML she becomes more dependent on him. The ML is your typical cold domineering type but he's so jealous it's ridiculous. Going as far as being jealous of the FL spending time with her family and taking her away as soon as she spends "too much time" with her family/friends which is just plain toxic and rude. FL doesn't seem to notice this as an issue though and keeps telling her family how nice ML is (uh seriously??). As far as cultivation is concerned, it's more like the FL gets lucky in mystic realms and gets stronger rather than putting in a lot of hard work. She doesn't exactly take initiative to get stronger either rather she gets pushed to by either the ML or her master. Antagonists wise I'd say 90% of the trouble she gets are from crazy "supposedly noble women" who are in love with the ML =_= The remaining 10% being her own proper antagonists. The ML doesn't really take care of these women either so they're like flies that keep coming to annoy you. Also the FL and ML have a problem with always underestimating their enemies like "oh they are just a jumping clown, we can kill them at any time". So when they are about to end the enemy the enemy escapes only to come back stronger and more annoying >_> This happens A LOT. Overall, I would rate this novel not the best but not the worst either. The only thing really keeping me going are the mysteries at this stage.
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Thank you for your candid review. I always appreciate getting a sense of how the plot and characters are. Then I know that this book isn't my cup of tea, and would probably frustrate me so that I would resent spending money on it. Thanks.
its 10/10 rate indeed for the fl being dependent to the ml and as for her over all strength she really didnt put any effort on them just plain lucks as for the enemys or the antagonist i really dont know how to find the suitable way to describe how the ml and fl deal with them because as its really makes the reader dumb ..always indifferent and didn't really take them to heart but once they come back again to make trouble the ml/fl would say that a scourge is hard to die when they have so many oppurtunities to deal with them before this happens for so many times that it gets annoying..plus the fact that the fl always coudnt understand things again and again when she has time shoudnt she needs to atleast understand the world she was in ,that shes not in 21st century any longer🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️
I keep hoping the author gives a proper villain that hurts those close to her so it forces her to wake up instead of all the bs going on where like you said the villain that should be dealt with is allowed to be let go and keep coming back
I agree. The author made the FL stupid AF. I know that a lot of authors use the MC's lack of knowledge as a way to inform the readers/world build but in this story she is really stupid about things that can be guessed through common sense. She always says she will work hard but she never does. She just floats along being carried by the ML. Her middle name should be- "Huh, I don't get it." I wish someone would spoil us on where she comes from and what happened with her mother and father. That's really the only reason I am reading this.
Omg! My thoughts exactly on their prey always escaping part. So annoying! Also, isn’t the ML super powerful? Why the fool always getting injured? And why his prey always manage to escape ? 🙄🙄
