This was a very enjoyable story with a rather relatable FL who really grew into a better version of herself through the bonds of family, friendship, and ofc romantic interests. I liked how she was emboldened by her awareness that the world was full of NPCs and was a story world. It gave her the freedom to take risks and really develop as a person. The story developed well but I personally was a little let down by the rushed feeling of the ending and some things that I saw as missed opportunities. There were still a few unaddressed matters that feel unresolved but there is also room for follow on stories with new MCs which may be interesting. The writing quality was pretty good overall with a nice paced narrative and some good spicy scenes. There were some reasonably consistent errors with things like English sayings (eg birds in the hands v a bird in the hand), grammar, certain pronouns, typos, etc but it wasn’t overly bothersome and the good points of the writing were what was most noticeable. Overall, I recommend this book. Come give it a whirl 🙂↕️
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Thank you so much for reading and though I'm not perfect, I'll try my best writing better in the future. You can also check my ongoing books, "Mated To The Cruel Prince," and "Sweet Wife Wants Revenge."
I will definitely be looking into your other stories, it’s always nice to find authors talented at developing their characters and relationships and who aren’t afraid of spicy scenes ✌🏻🙂↕️
