Review Detail of Daniel_Tapiro_6903 in Super Necromancer System

The concept is 10/10. Think 'The Boys' in a cyberpunk setting and the MC has powers and summons that are based on magic and fantasy. That might sound like a lot but the author actually found a way to make it work. MC is cool in the fact that he's ruthless, cunning and doesn't even fall to the generic trap of exposing his powers to the world before he's ready to fight back. Unlike a lot of these system type novels where MC will help someone, thus exposing himself and having enemies target him early(generic stuff like that). On the other hand, he's far too edgy for my liking. . . He both literally and figuratively turns himself into more of a monster the longer the story goes on. The idea that all he cares about is power is cool but the fact that he's a decent person overall really makes you question his whole willingness to turn himself more and more to a monster(just feels unnecessary to me, I'm totally fine with him just being a ruthless person. Would make a lot more sense) Then there's the pacing. This is probably the worst part of this novel by far. . . It's so incredibly slow. Events that you feel should take 2 chapters take like 5 with multiple repeats of the same information and over descriptions of things and appearances. In any other novel this would actually be a deal breaker imo, but like I said because the concept is so cool to over amount of exposition is bearable. But yeah, by the time you get to chapter 150 you feel like we could have gotten here at chapters 100-120.