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say_rahhLv141yr
2022-12-19 00:17

I liked the idea of a modern Exorcist so I decided to give this Novel a try but it started going towards a downward spiral the ML is supposedly powerful but and strong bus has a weird submissivenes to her husband because if his yang energy which seems very forced and make the story loose its flow, then most of plot was just so annoying at some point because I could never understand why she was did somethings. I hardly comment on novels bit this is just so sad because I felt this had more potential.

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fairytail72
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I have already told everyone that the book is 1000+ chapters even i found it annoying that you guys read only 50 chapters or at most hundred , whats more you even give me one star rating without letting the story take form, The book gets better after 150 chapters frm next time please give the book a chance properly before writing such a long review , this is simply annoying the author for no reason !

say_rahh
say_rahhLv14

it’s hard to give something a chance when it doesn’t redeem itself in the earlier chapters….if a reader can’t be motivated to continue it then it’s the author’s fault for not baiting the reader

fairytail72:I have already told everyone that the book is 1000+ chapters even i found it annoying that you guys read only 50 chapters or at most hundred , whats more you even give me one star rating without letting the story take form, The book gets better after 150 chapters frm next time please give the book a chance properly before writing such a long review , this is simply annoying the author for no reason !
fairytail72
fairytail72Author

Lol that’s laughable . As a reader are you not aware of whats called plot line lol? Character development rofl? Climax? They are developed according to the plot. Reading 150 chapters out of 1000 is not the authors fault they will pace the chapters according to the plotline. Its the readers fault to expect authors to throw everything aside and please them

say_rahh:it’s hard to give something a chance when it doesn’t redeem itself in the earlier chapters….if a reader can’t be motivated to continue it then it’s the author’s fault for not baiting the reader
say_rahh
say_rahhLv14

it’s logical, you’ve got to engage your reader and keep them interested as much as you want to keep your build up

fairytail72:Lol that’s laughable . As a reader are you not aware of whats called plot line lol? Character development rofl? Climax? They are developed according to the plot. Reading 150 chapters out of 1000 is not the authors fault they will pace the chapters according to the plotline. Its the readers fault to expect authors to throw everything aside and please them
fairytail72
fairytail72Author

Its just not your cup of tea, there was a reason why the fl acted that way and why the ml was cold towards her. Both of the reasons were cleared up as soon as they could . It doesn’t mean that the story doesn’t hook up and keep them interested . There is a reason why its still running coz a lot of readers like it. You are used to fast paced novels and I’m not blaming you but there is no need to condemn a novel like such coz you didn’t even give it a chance and reading only 150 chapters out of 1447 is not giving it a chance . A review is supposed to be given after reading at least half of the book. Not just the starting chapters. I still find it bewildering that just coz it was not your cup of tea, you blamed the book , the author and the plot.

say_rahh:it’s logical, you’ve got to engage your reader and keep them interested as much as you want to keep your build up
say_rahh
say_rahhLv14

sure sure

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