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Dimensionist
DimensionistLv153yr
2022-01-08 20:16

The story's basically combining a number of systems to create one system that provides basically everything to the MC without him having to really do anything. It's also got the usual cliche super handsome MC, but made worse by the MC being a complete idiot who blanks out on noticing there's a girl with him, and also who responds to someone attacking him and trying to kill him (and straight up telling him) with confusion and, again, blanking out. He also constantly gets lost in his own head, where the author takes time to dole out exposition in situations where he should really be focusing on what's in front of him. I don't expect a hypercompetent MC, but I'm certainly not interested in reading about a mentally challenged, milquetoast of an MC who behaves like he's never held a girl's hand before.

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ClamLeader
ClamLeaderLv15

this sums up my opinion pretty well. even with the system I wonder why these authors choose to try and level up the MC without any restraint. 5 years to get to level 5 but jumps 2 levels in two days and all this without any work from the MC who constantly complins about it.

Domn
DomnLv13

I have never held a girl's hand.......

ziad_7amoda
ziad_7amodaLv2

.......🥲

Domn:I have never held a girl's hand.......
MwatamuLe
MwatamuLeLv6

Then you might be a MC for certain novel. Don’t give up, there might be harem ahead.

Domn:I have never held a girl's hand.......
lucaskubo
lucaskuboLv4

lol

MwatamuLe:Then you might be a MC for certain novel. Don’t give up, there might be harem ahead.
Cosmicanalog
CosmicanalogLv10

Hahaha🤣😂🤣

MwatamuLe:Then you might be a MC for certain novel. Don’t give up, there might be harem ahead.
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