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From what was said, the MC was reincarnated in Charlotte Linlin's body since birth. Hence, she can basically have a completely different history compared to canon - probably never ate Carmel, ate a different DF, etc.
The very latest chapter of this story still has the problem. 'Freezing darkness' is repeated far too often (wtf is freezing sunlight???), 'violently choked unconscious' is completely redundant (is there a peaceful way to choke someone unconscious???), and too much unneeded emphasis and purple prose for me to mention here. Honestly, it's better to have less words than more in most cases. KISS principle - Keep It Simple (leaving the last word out so this isn't somehow taken as a flame).
An okayish story ruined by ... okay, let's use the following paragraph to illustrate exactly what's wrong with it: It is the absolutely catastrophic use of absolute AI nonsense that completely ruins it. The catastrophic AI uses completely unequivocally poorly exaggerated words, absolutely catastrophically bad emphasis, and completely absolutely repetitive word choice to completely shatter the absolute immersion into this completely okay story to the absolute point where it is catastrophically bad. Absolutely. Catastrophically. Have I used enough of the words here? And the editor not only doesn't notice this, but has similar issues with all of his stories to the point you can make a bar game of it. It's just ... sad.
Yes, exactly! How has the author/editor not realized how weird his stories sound yet? I had to unfollow one of his stories already because every paragraph was just filled with nonsensical additions like 'absolute, apocalyptic fury' or exaggerated purple prose like that.
Note I said external items - it's referring to items artificially produced for that purpose, not soul skills or soul bone skills.
Actually, it canonically doesn't have a means to recover soul power through external items, outside of just devouring people or soul beasts or natural recovery through food. That's achieved through a particular type of soul tool developed 10,000 years later.
A single full restore potion from Rimuru could change the outcome of the war, tbh. Prime Whitebeard was a beast.
One dimensional characters, characters who never learn and grow and lack even the most fundamental common sense, cookie cutter plots repeated constantly with little development ... yeah, this one's just worthless.
Hogwarts Legacy. One of the characters there is a transfer from Uagadou, and she mentions that they never use wands there, so it's been an adjustment. It was mentioned previously in a lore statement too, but can't find that one.
He already said he's a civilian, so very low chakra, less than an academy student even. That's also the reason he has so many issues with stamina, even though a high chakra amount automatically means you have high stamina, since it's half physical energy.