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2022-08-02 19:15

Great story I will be waiting for new chapter ................................. ............................................................

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jkl_user
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As per the author’s request I am leaving a review. I typicall don’t write reviews but this story had me hooked from from the beginning. Also I’ll try not to spoil things in this review. First off, the writing quality is great. Syntax is good and there are almost no redundancies when describing things. Some stories here have the same adjectives and phrases used over and over and it becomes annoying to read. It is not the case for this story and it feels like a breath of fresh air because it is hard to find good writing quality here. 5/5 Next the story is updated pretty frequently, a chapter every couple of days. And you can join the pat reon to read many chapters ahead of you wish. That’s pretty much all I have to say for that. 4/5 The premise of the story is what got me hooked. I enjoy slice of life stories a lot and the focus on characters that follows. I’ve read ahead on pat reon and have loved the character growth and development. I’m not sure where the author is going to take the story. It could be more laid-back or other worldly elements could be introduced. Whatever the route the author decides I’m all for. 4/5 The characters are the most integral part of this story. They feel believable and fully fleshed out. Stanley feels early fears feel like a real reaction a person would have if they were put in that situation. And Ez behaves how you would expect a person from another culture and world to behave. All in all the characters and their interactions are the meat and potatoes of the story. And they’re great. 5/5 Lastly, the world building has been pretty good so far. I find the second hand information presented through a game wiki to be an elegant way to info dump about the other world that is told to the readers but never shown. I’m waiting to see how the setting changes if it ever does depending on where the author wants to take the story. 4/5 That’s it for my first review ever. I wanted to try and do the story justice so it took a bit to articulate this. Give this story a shot. I believe you’ll like it!

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