Disclaimer: This is going to be a bit harsh so ignore this review if you don't like critism. Writing Quality -2: Extra spaces, missed punctuation, wrong punctation, puncuation where none is required are everywhere in this novel. Examples include: spaces after an opening quote (" abc."), quotes in narrator voice, single quotes where double quotes should be, and more. Spelling and word choice need work as well. Stability of Updates: I don't care if it takes the author years to make. I'll update this rating to 5/5 if this novel reaches a natural conclusion. Story Development +1: Some twists and turns exist. Passable for a fanfiction. Character Design -2: The characters' height, weight, apparel, hair color, affect, voice, are mostly undetailed. Using more character detail would greatly benefit this story. World Background -2: The background of the world can be summed up in a single senetence. It's New York, basically. That's not good. Proper noun usage could be better to detail the locations where the plot points take place. Such as names of streets, shops the character passes running places, etc.
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