I just started reading. And before you complain, I think it's shirty. First of all, the MC revealed the system as early as chapter 1. That sucks, but I can understand that even though I'm still mad about it. Second, write on the synopsis that you're not an English native. I had so much expectation from this when I read the synopsis, but when I got to reading it the spellings, or grammar and vocabulary in general, just made me cringe. The story itself is not a problem, but the way you use large letters so often makes me think you're 11-15 years old. Learn english the proper way first before you start writing. I'm going to continue reading this and will change this rating when I think it's appropriate.
zedmoto123
Liked it!
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