This Fanfic would have rocked if the author had not made MC too much OP in the starting. There is a lot of chilché in this Fanfic, which can be ignored honestly. But the second main problem is the needlessly adding girls to MC'S harem. Like in just staring 10 or so chapters, MC already have 4 girls! Writing Quality is ok. Some minor mistakes which can be ignored easily. Story development. This is one of this story's downfall. Too much harem memebers and MC becomes OP too soon. Like he becomes OP in the first chapter! I would have loved this Fanfic if the MC was strong and grows stronger progressively. He should have given a few opponents who he was defeated by but he trains and gets stronger and beats them. Character Design. This is kinda ok'ish. Updating Stability. Good. World Background. This Fanfic have quite a lot of anime mixed up. Which can be good as well as disastrous for this Fanfic. But still, this mix-up made MC get more girls in his harem... OVERALL: This book is good for harem lovers with a slice of life vibe where MC is OP from the start and there are no enemies that can face him Also there is a Pokemon catching harem, which toned this Fanfic down. So read it if you like too easy Pokemon harem with slice of life where MC is OP and there is nothing much for MC to do in his world...
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