Review Detail of Onkit_Pal in [Marvel:Naruto Template System]

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Onkit_PalLv32yrOnkit_Pal

Worst please don't write novel please, ancient one is not God. she magician how also she can predict future by using time Stone can now certain things, like hallo Otherworldly you Reincarnated etc. I don't understand how you wrote like this this make isn't any sense, I now she powerful but this to much I think you should watch more marvel movies also comic any you about good by, and please stop writing

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AceTheHonoredOne

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AceTheHonoredOneAuthorAceTheHonoredOne

You're saying my whole novel is bad and I should stop writing because of 1 paragraph that you don't even understand? The paragraph will make sense because it will be explained LATER, so you can't even understand it YET. Just because you don't understand something doesn't make it bad🤦🏻‍♂️

2yr

Onkit_PalLv3Onkit_Pal

Boss each paragraph in story is important step by step make good story but you already wrote something not understandable,

2yr

Onkit_PalLv3Onkit_Pal

I read it many fan pic also many novels so now many mistakes you did. Tray to learn from it please. Thanks you well improve👍😊

2yr

RemoteRomanceLv3RemoteRomance

Thats a non-argument. Readers have to suspend their disbelief to read and if you make something that dumb then people will be dragged out of it and thus not like it.

AceTheHonoredOne:You're saying my whole novel is bad and I should stop writing because of 1 paragraph that you don't even understand? The paragraph will make sense because it will be explained LATER, so you can't even understand it YET. Just because you don't understand something doesn't make it bad🤦🏻‍♂️

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