Another copy/paste with 0 originality. Sad and disappointing. The Mc crying for no reason, justification of idiotic plots that make 0 sense.
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LIKE1:Forcing him out of the village to learn medical skills while his "Grandpa" deals with Danzo, While also not doing anything. 2: his team gets failed because the author doesn't want to write anything remotely close to original. 3: He gets caught in every important fight he has because of a weakness that doesn't exist. 4: He gets dumbed down like a rtard because if he isn't then the plot the author writes won't work. 5: He has killed like... 5000+ beings, yet he goes home and wails like a child when failing a test(While also being one of the most op characters in the village may i add). 6: rescues an Uchiha child, yet refuses to socialize with said person because "Oh no what if people find out" (He had a connection with this "Child" to then the author realizes he doesn't need character development and tosses it aside until like.. chapter 250 or so. The list goes on though, just mentioning a few.
Book_Addict_8101:Give me a exampleš
For your second example would you just like the author to make the characters trust each other as soon as they meet of course they would think about there self before someone they donāt know. Of course he would feel sad about losing the test he thought his chances of being a ninja were close to zero and it was his first defeat in that world after so much success of course he would be sad I canāt look back at what you said for the other examples so i canāt rememberš„²
QuiteSarcastic:1:Forcing him out of the village to learn medical skills while his "Grandpa" deals with Danzo, While also not doing anything. 2: his team gets failed because the author doesn't want to write anything remotely close to original. 3: He gets caught in every important fight he has because of a weakness that doesn't exist. 4: He gets dumbed down like a rtard because if he isn't then the plot the author writes won't work. 5: He has killed like... 5000+ beings, yet he goes home and wails like a child when failing a test(While also being one of the most op characters in the village may i add). 6: rescues an Uchiha child, yet refuses to socialize with said person because "Oh no what if people find out" (He had a connection with this "Child" to then the author realizes he doesn't need character development and tosses it aside until like.. chapter 250 or so. The list goes on though, just mentioning a few.
You are right on the second example, but you can't tell me that there wasn't at least a plethora of different ways to make anything original right? :P Although it was understandable he would be frustrated after his first loss making him wail and cry because of it is quite over the line for his character though. He already lost a life before, what would a test compare to that?
Book_Addict_8101:For your second example would you just like the author to make the characters trust each other as soon as they meet of course they would think about there self before someone they donāt know. Of course he would feel sad about losing the test he thought his chances of being a ninja were close to zero and it was his first defeat in that world after so much success of course he would be sad I canāt look back at what you said for the other examples so i canāt rememberš„²