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LowPriorityCitizenLv31yr
2023-06-05 09:23

The Gamer system here is pretty underwhelming and weak. All Mc does is stupid, he never grind skill, never think way ahead. all his skills are basically what he watched from anime or from ninjutsu scroll.. Leaf concentration (for chakra control), Chakra thread, shuriken jutsu, 5 C-level element jutsu, etc. Also his skills aren't that strong despite being in lvl 70-90.. just trash. his shuriken jutsu at lvl 90 cant beat Itachi's from sasuke's story (probably itachi was 12 at that time). Proficiency system, not gamer system

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Random_exeLv13

Nope what you are saying is false , this is a gamer system it does have the core mechanics of a gamer system from the original comic but idk what you expected maybe some chinese story level system that gives the mc almost whatever he desire from op skills to legendary items for plot convenience , this is a game system , it gives him quests , stats and skill proficiency showcase , dungeons to explore ..ect so basically no hand holding and mc has to grind a ton and thats why the story is a bit slow paced maybe slow paced fic are just not for you better look for a fic where the dude gets to kage lvl in a single year or less . And the fact you actually said that mc never grind is enough for me to know you didn’t read past 20 chaps or you just did the infamous fast scrolling , the mf is grinding 24/7 , rarely takes time for himself and when he does its like actually valuable time wasted by improving his bonds with the main characters. Now about his skills , idk what you expect him to learn if not stuff he watched in the show or read in the scrolls , do you want him to pull a goku kamehameha or something ? i dont understand ?

Alola_123Lv1

This is an NPC . Again , what is up with these fools. How could you comment without reading the novel.

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First of all id like to say that this is one of the best-written Naruto fanfictions I've read. It doesn't suddenly turn into some harem ecchi novel and it focuses on the power methods (mostly) in the naruto world. Why did it end up with a 3.6 rating? Let me explain and if the author is reading then I hope this review helps. Writing quality (4*): The writing quality is ok with no bad spag (spelling, punctuation, and grammar) and you can see it get better as the story progresses. You can definitely see the author's improvements. I gave it 4* though since the writing quality isn't anything mind-blowing but still flows nicely and is very readable. Story development (3*): Ok so the start of the story was very cliche and I feel sets a rather bland tone for the story. He is some rich unmotivated kid with no real friends in school, gets stage 3 cancer and runs out of the hospital, sees a cat and while crossing the road is involved in a car accident. He then gets adopted by a powerful old ninja who helps him to train to become stronger because he has been told to do so by a mysterious individual. Now there isn't anything bad per se with this setup but isn't anything groundbreaking either. Not to mention making the audience feel not super engaged with the story. Later on, he is thrust into interacting with the Hokage and some other heavy hitters while still in the academy, and once he finally graduates he is so far ahead of the main cast it's pretty laughable. He also is a rather righteous person which was a bit of a letdown since I do enjoy a more neutral leaning Mc. The fact he is in the shinobi world makes that even more odd since the story is a lot darker than you realize at first. With genocides, war constantly occurring and the leaf village being just as bad even with the preaching of peace I would have expected him to at least be less naive. Still, he does get fairly strong, and although I don't agree with some of his choices like with the Uchiha massacre and the way he was dragged into that plot his reactions and actions do fit into how he has been portrayed so far. A few ideas that could help could be getting the 3 tails that is in the lake if he hasn't been grabbed by the Akatsuki already, the peacock method could be explored, giving him other summons to learn from, learn or explore how hydrificaton works and if he can use other elements, even turn into a mist (plus with poison, he could become a poison mist or even make poison mist clones). So the story is a 3* in my opinion, definitely could be better and I can only hope he can he doesn't become some Saint or savior of everyone and everything in need. Character design (3*): the characters do fit their canon designs and their interactions do flow nicely and fit. However, the reason it's a 3* is because of the two main Oc Kensei and Daichi. Kensei is the old man who adopted Daichi and while he is ok doesn't really have too much depth to him and is there mainly to kind of help shield him from the big players a little and to give Daichi a mentor figure who trains him. He does what he is supposed to though so no real complaints. Daichi is a pretty typical mc. Nothing really special which is why I wasn't too surprised or disappointed with his good leaning. Would have been way more interesting if he was just fully selfish and thought about himself. Still, I am happy with the no romance (which I hope stays that way) and the confirmation of no harem. Update stability (5*): updates are very regular which is nice, especially for when you want to wait for a little and binge all the new chapters at once. World background (3*): it's just the naruto world which isn't too exciting but the methods of training the elements are very interesting. Hope things can continue in that vein.

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