Evaluation: Subpar (Not my cup of tea). WQ: A few unnoticeable gramm errors which can be improved on. A well structured type of writing which is a plus. 4/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development, It's too long winded wherein the adventure or training arc of MC takes too long. A snail pace of story & MC progression. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. Lacks utilization of OPverse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 3/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed. 3/5 WB: There's nothing to discuss here as most MCs encounters are just a repeat of Rocks/Roger history. Lacks exploration and adventuring as the plot progression is too slow. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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