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I don't know why everyone is raving about this fanfic. I've read 10 chapters and it's a very boring cliché fic. I didn't find anything interesting in it, the usual MC, the usual powers, the usual fruit, the usual plot, everything is ordinary. There is no humor at all, as if you are reading about a brick and not a person. Some may say that 10 chapters is not enough and it will get better, but why should I read boring content for the sake of what may or may not be. I once read reviews of a novel where a person didn’t like the novel after 100 chapters, but they wrote to him to wait and that the novel would get better by chapter 500. And about this novel, he pulls a maximum of 4 stars, and even then only because the rating in Webnovel is broken and everything below 3 is already complete trash.
Evaluation: Subpar (Not my cup of tea). WQ: A few unnoticeable gramm errors which can be improved on. A well structured type of writing which is a plus. 4/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development, It's too long winded wherein the adventure or training arc of MC takes too long. A snail pace of story & MC progression. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. Lacks utilization of OPverse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 3/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed. 3/5 WB: There's nothing to discuss here as most MCs encounters are just a repeat of Rocks/Roger history. Lacks exploration and adventuring as the plot progression is too slow. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
Great story hope the authors doesn’t Drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.Great story hope the authors doesn’t Drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.
Great story hope the authors doesn’t Drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.
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This ff has huge potential and promise, I expect it to at least have 100+ chapters in the future with this start. I just hope the author doesn’t make a mistake with the system, power scaling later on and with the canon, bc if the author changed something in the canon that’s detrimental for the story for example, killing an future admiral or conquering/getting things that’s not his like the fruit of Ace and yonko territories(eh)……the mcs fruit is alr since it doesn’t change the plot a lot. Anyways, it’s a 5/5.
really surprised that i haven't read this novel till this moment everything were put where it should be a complete wounder🔥🔥🔥🔥 thanks really for this ff author 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Ngl this fanfiction is pretty good to read especially when I have read through most of the other one piece fics still I'm waiting for more fight scenes honestly
Aller j’aime bien, surtout que c’est l’époque où la mer est la plus déchaînée, mais le mc compte trop sur son fruit du demons… C’est shanks, l’homme qui est devenue empereur avec du haki et une épée. Et j’ai aussi l’impression que le mc est un peureux, dit il qu’il ne veut pas se battre contre Roger et xebec pour améliorer son haki, je comprends. Mais il existe d’autre personne, l’entraînement en mode ermite ne donne rien normalement. La preuve est luffy, il est passé de recrue à empereur en 2 ans et demis.
(Naruto + Single Heroine Tsunade + Romance + Action) A failed author transmigrates into the Naruto world, becoming the younger brother of Konoha’s White Fang, Sakumo Hatake, and the uncle of Kakashi. He gains a cheat ability—enhanced cellular activity. Coincidentally, just before the Second Shinobi War, he participates in a Jonin meeting where he supports Tsunade's proposal ahead of Dan Kato, marking his first encounter with her. From then on, he launches an intense pursuit, winning her heart during the war. Tsunade: "Kawakaze, why do I keep losing to you?" Kawakaze Hatake: "Because I’d like to live a few more years..." Kakashi: "My uncle is amazing, I’m his biggest fan!" Kawakaze Hatake: "Keep it low-key, keep it low-key." *This is a Translation* Original Name: 火影:从追求纲手开始 Original Author: 懒猫Z Patreon: (60 Chapters Ahead) patreon com / PinkSnake Chapter Release Rate: 2/Day
A man who would have preferred not to be there was reincarnated into Narutoverse. Much to his chagrin, he received no powers, system or anything the fanfic protagonists he read about in his past life usually got. Eventually, finding his calling in the art of sealing and excelling, he has only his own determination and smarts to survive the upcoming apocalyptic events. Now, if only Sarutobi for some reason did not butterfly most of his foreknowledge away with his superb decision-making. What has life in store for him now? One thing is certain, things don't always go his way. ------------------------------------------------ Think of this world as an alternate universe. It started as canon but the MCs existence caused butterflies. Unknown even to him, he said the wrong thing at the wrong time to the wrong person... and here we go. But don't tell him. He is going to find out much later on in the story that his problems were caused by himself. ------------------------------------------------ Anyone who wants to support me: https://www.patreon.com/kasicair
Reborn in the world of One Piece, our handsome, proud, and arrogant MC finds himself reborn as the twin brother of Luffy. {This is a world-traveling story}
I am Uchiha Shirou! I represent all bloodline families in the Shinobi World. This is a world that values the power of bloodlines! Under the true Will of Fire, the rise of Konoha has brought about an unprecedented revolution in the entire Shinobi World! Studying medicine won’t save the Shinobi World! This is the story of my struggle! Read Advanced Chapter in Patreon.com/AbsoluteCode Join: https://discord.gg/9zUZj5ksxM For more info: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/naruto-i-am-uchiha-shirou/
Traveling to the Uchiha clan in the world of Naruto, Yuta activated the god-level talent analysis system! Every time his strength increases by one level, a new talent can be analyzed. Since then, the strongest genius in the history of Konoha was born! And this was just the beginning. Analyze Might Guy's Physique talent, Kakashi's Lightning Release talent, Shisui's Genjutsu talent... On the night of the extermination, Yuta used Susanoo, Eight Inner Gates, and controlled Kirin in the sky. "Sarutobi Huruzen, Danzo, how do you want to die?" Note: This is just a translation. All the credit goes to the original creators. Raw: 木叶:天赋暴击,开局因陀罗血脉 70 Advanced chapters on p@treon.com/alex_1000
Akira Kisaragi traverses into the Bleach world, unlocking a check-in system. He initially thought that by checking in daily, he could become stronger, soon become the Captain-Commander, join Division Zero, punch Yhwach, kick the Soul King, and marry Unohana... However, the system's style wasn't quite what he had imagined. 〈 Check-in complete, obtained Genryūsai Yamamoto's secret roasted sweet potato! 〉 〈 Check-in complete, obtained exclusive attribute: King of Normal Attacks, effect... 〉 〈 Check-in complete, obtained Retsu Unohana's... 〉 Akira's eyes suddenly lit up! “Seems like this might not be so bad after all!” ________ Note: This is just a translation from a fanfic, so neither I claim ownership over it, neither the original author can claim ownership over Bleach. So, let's just have fun. I hope you like it! Raw: 死神:从签到开始的最强剑八 or Bleach: The Strongest Kenpachi Starting from Check-ins Author: 临渊养鱼 or Fishing by the Abyss Patreon for more fanfics and advanced chapters: https://www.pa-treon.com/mrblackwing
The story starts at the end of another. A young boy reincarnated in the world of 'My Hero Academia' and he was born with the template system of 'Ryomen Sukuna' from Jujutsu Kaisen. He was born decades before the canon story starts and he was in the same generation with people like Rumi, Ryukyu, Aizawa etc. He lived the typical reincarnated life. He had a great family this time around, went to UA, faced multiple challenges and overcame them, fell in love and went on to fight the main villain All for One. But here is the twist. This story will start only after the main character complete the Sukuna Template which is the end of his story. We will skip the whole part of getting to UA, training his power, falling in love, completing system mission etc. This is because the main character is truly himself only after the system is completed. That is when the main character became truly free again, without system missions and Sukuna's influence. This story will be like 'Frieren: Beyond Journey's End' where the story will reveal the past while also moving forward. I am not very good with synopsis so please just read the first few chapters. .. .. //////////////////////// What to expect : #A good MC but fate wants him to be evil. Being good and having Sukuna template does not go well. #Rumi as the main romantic partner with a few girls here and there. It's complicated but ultimately in the harem category. #Overpowered MC from the start. Only All Might and All for One are even in his level of strength. #Revenge and tragedy. This mostly happen before the story starts but in the current timeline there will be no tragedy. #Although MC is in an older generation, the canon timeline will still be relevant. #Slight AU on the years of characters. Mostly the old heroes so that they can be in the same generation. For Example Midnight is like two years younger so that she was MC's classmate That is all.
One day some random dude gets reincarnated into Naruto as a god, turns out starting a religion is kinda hard, who knew? Now with more selling out: https://www.patreon.com/valeronwriter