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2022-07-29 23:24

I really thought this would be decent and tried to keep reading hoping it would get good but I had to stop. The grammar is not great which is usually not a big deal to me but it's hard to comprehend some of the content, the pacing is also weird, it'll just randomly kinda cut forward in time without saying anything, just suddenly they're having a conversation somewhere else. No real interest in the world or the mc, normally I would read more and give it a chance but this just feels very amateur and hard to read to me. If you enjoy this then more power to you but this is not for me.

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