webnovel
The_G0at
The_G0atLv32yr
2022-05-09 21:28

I have read about 10 chapters and I have to say that it's not bad the world-building is good there are no writing mistakes however I don't like the fact that the mc hates the deviants for no reason he comes from a powerful family I see no reason as to why he would hate them. he did say that they are oppressing the normal ppl but the author said that he's an antihero so that can't be it

DEVIANT

3_Sins_Studios
4.3
472 Chs

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
Replies1
3_Sins_Studios
3_Sins_StudiosAuthor

you will find out more about our MC as you read more... thanks for the review!

2yr
Other Reviews
3_Sins_Studios
3_Sins_StudiosAuthor

Shameless author review... I put in quite some effort into creating this world for my readers, with an antagonistic type protagonist, who would do whatever it takes to achieve his goal

3yr

Silver2285
Silver2285Lv12

A really good story. jafjafjsgjCjafsgkzcjafusgkacbafuwtidhpeypvkvnadhqrjeglzcjaduwtisvjaduwtizgjardkfkencnrkakckrwlri Had to add charactors

2yr
Vee_High
Vee_HighLv12

am an author myself and I have read so many books, both on web novel and other sites but I have to give you this credit, you nailed it, it's just so awesome that you are now taking part of my 5 hours Mobil access, but I think it's worth it 馃馃

2yr
Death_Sounds
Death_SoundsLv15

I really thought this would be decent and tried to keep reading hoping it would get good but I had to stop. The grammar is not great which is usually not a big deal to me but it's hard to comprehend some of the content, the pacing is also weird, it'll just randomly kinda cut forward in time without saying anything, just suddenly they're having a conversation somewhere else. No real interest in the world or the mc, normally I would read more and give it a chance but this just feels very amateur and hard to read to me. If you enjoy this then more power to you but this is not for me.

2yr
X_R_6645
X_R_6645Lv1

evil mc : mc don't kill any one Smart mc :if smart, mc won't be tool Very weak MC every figt mc always uses his full power Boring nothing special about mc Evil mc, are you kidding me

2yr
A_i_v_i_e
A_i_v_i_eLv13

.I love reading action novels.. well if possible in comic version ..馃榿馃榿馃榿 hehehe... . after reading the positive comments 馃憣馃憣 ... I think I should give it a go then .. 馃馃馃馃

2yr
Carol_Drake
Carol_DrakeLv1

i have to admit it started really nice, buh along the line I don't really know what to make of the MC,is he supposed to be a simp 馃,and degrading the power of higher ranks just to make the MC look cool is a little too much

2yr
Isosiya_Biggs
Isosiya_BiggsLv1

Are you a member of the Briggs family Nigeria

2yr
Kelvin_A
Kelvin_ALv14

I started this book, not having much expectations, but now I can't peel my eyes away from it. Thank you for adding to my addiction Author. This is a very well written book.

2yr
Related Stories

Reincarnated To Evolve My Bee Empire

"Now, go forth, my mortal champion! Conquer this world鈥攐r else!" I lived a painfully average life and died by a stupid, stupid accident, but a goddess interfered, giving me a second chance in another world. There, I became royalty鈥攖he lazy kind with almost no obligations, free to live in peace and luxury for the rest of my days. Sounds like a dream, right? In reality, it was anything but鈥攂ecause I became *BEE* royalty. A Drone Bee, doomed to die of old age in 2 months! (A humanoid bee, thankfully, but still a bee in all the ways that matter.) The only way to increase my lifespan is to develop and grow my bee colony鈥攁 deadly task in a vicious world like this one. There are murderous insect monsters, colossal beasts trampling the earth, other civilizations, natural disasters, and the bitchy patron goddess who absolutely hates me. But as long as I have my brains, my bees, and the powerful genes my system gives me, my Bee Empire will be unstoppable! === For those who want to know more: This is a wholesome comedic story, but it has some dark moments. The focus is on kingdom building, survival as an empire, and interacting with MC鈥檚 beautiful bee wife and adorable bee daughters. The bees are all humanoid (see pictures) and human-sized. However, they are still bees in their ways of life and mentality. Although there鈥檚 a system, real growth comes from putting effort and time. Nothing happens in an instant in this story, unless it鈥檚 trouble. MC acts like an idiot sometimes (oftentimes), but he鈥檚 not actually stupid-stupid. When it comes to strategic decisions, he uses logic and reason. Even if you might disagree with it. Also, there will be no smut (ecchi is a fair game), incest, NTR, harem or BL. === Updates: 2 chapters/day, right after the reset (with a 5% chance of running late). Reply to author's pinned review if you have questions. Discord is up! Find it at -> https://linktr.ee/Garessta

Garessta 路 Fantasy
4.9
162 Chs

Dimensional Keeper: All My Skills Are at Level 100

"Not even the gods can stop me from finding my family!" Max only wanted to reunite with his parents and sister. But for that, he had to awaken a class. With no high expectations, Max would鈥檝e been satisfied with a C or D rank. But fate had other plans. He unlocked a legendary SSS-Rank class. [Dimensional Keeper] This class changed everything. Max mastered every skill to perfection and grasped the Concepts of Space and Time while his peers were playing around with swords. In no time, he ascended to become the Keeper of the Universe. Armed with unimaginable power, Max鈥檚 journey to find his family had begun. Nothing could stop him now鈥攏ot fate, not enemies, not even the mighty gods! --- Discord Link:- https://discord.gg/xPZZbXbAAq

ShinGotLost 路 Fantasy
4.4
266 Chs

Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades

Neo transmigrated into world of a novel and became a side character. Here, strength and status were determined by one's god parent and their bloodline. Neo despaired, knowing a side character like him would have a weak bloodline until.... [Your bloodline has been awakened successfully] [Bloodline: Monarch of Death] He gained the bloodline of the strongest god: Hades, the God of Death who ruled over Underworld and Afterlife! His bloodline gave him the power to control Death itself! There was just one 'tiny' problem that Neo had yet to realize. ... Join Discord for character arts and talk with the author. [https://discord.gg/eyKkrRqMMW] Visit the kofi page for the high resolution character pics, and to vote for the next character whose pics should be made: [ko-fi.com/failedwriter10]

FailedWriter101 路 Fantasy
4.4
444 Chs

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

The white lotus, a legendary artifact rumored to contain the very secrets of the soul, granted its wielder otherworldly power. Countless powerful Magi from all across the universe waged an epic battle over it. When the dust settled from their fierce clash, the artifact disappeared, awaiting to be inherited by one with great destiny. Adam dreamed of breaking free from the grip of poverty, yearning for a life of riches and comfort. Yet, in a world ruled by arcane spellcasters, achieving such a dream meant becoming one himself. However, learning magic was an expensive aspiration. Not only did it require talent, but also vast resources, neither of which he had. But one day everything changed when he stumbled upon a mysterious white lotus... *** Join my discord: https://discord.gg/w4vACWwfSv

Esenel 路 Fantasy
4.2
701 Chs

The Runic Alchemist

Ben, a postgraduate chemistry student, envisions a future where science unlocks the secrets of the universe. But fate has other plans. In a sudden twist, Ben dies and awakens in a strange new world, reborn as a five-year-old boy named Damian Sunblade. Damian's joy at being part of a noble family is short-lived. His family, valuing gold over blood, sells him off to another noble house to be groomed as a homemaker husband, a mere pawn in their political games. Struggling with his new reality and the remnants of his past life鈥檚 knowledge, Damian refuses to succumb to his fate. In his new household, Damian discovers that this world is governed by magic circles, Runic symbols wielding immense power. Driven by his scientific curiosity, Damian begins to experiment. Applying the laws of physics to the Rune symbols, he deciphers their secrets and invents his own unique form of magic. However, The family that bought him has their own plans for him, seeing Damian as a valuable tool to enhance their power. But Damian, ever the independent spirit, has dreams beyond servitude. He longs for freedom, a place to call his own鈥攁 life where he can use his talents without restraint. And so Damian devises a daring plan to escape. His journey is fraught with danger and intrigue, as he navigates a world filled with mystical creatures, powerful adversaries, and ancient secrets. Along the way, he forges alliances and battles enemies, all while refining his magical and scientific skills. In "The Runic Alchemist," follow Damian Sunblade鈥檚 epic quest for independence and self-discovery. Witness his transformation from a forsaken child to a formidable Alchemist, determined to carve out an extraordinary future for himself in a world teeming with infinite possibilities. ***** Author Note : Hello! GlaringError here! As I have already mentioned in my author review I am restating it here since I am getting tons of comments about it, that I am more of a reader myself than a writer, I made this novel in an attempt to capture my fantasy world residing in my mind into words.. Writing is new for me.. The premise of my novel is inspired by many great works that I have loved over the years. And some elements I have in my novel that are slightly similar to them but it's just the skeleton of it, the real meat of the plot is entirely my own cooking. Some of the influence that is more noticeable is from The Runesmith (By Kuropon), The King's Avatar (By Butterfly Blue) and Shadow Slave (By Guiltythree). I have immense respect for these legends and I can only hope to follow in their footsteps. To all those who comment just by judging the name, at least give it a chance before letting your opinions be known. Thank you.

GlaringError 路 Fantasy
4.3
495 Chs
Login