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2022-01-18 11:09

Inconsistent detail elements. A pure skimmer for me..........................................................................................

Alexander Benjamin Tennyson (Ben 10 Fanfic)

Zeckyll11
4.4
182 Chs

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Kintaro498
Kintaro498Lv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr

PieceofSh1tApp
PieceofSh1tAppLv4

Characters are dull and have no depth, this guy has thick plot armor whenever he has to talk to someone, they always believe him, do what he says, they always say how he's perfect and chooses the best method super duper quick. Gwen and Grandpa Max are soooo robotic in this story. Grammar is a low priority for this author considering that words are missing sometimes and they spoken English is very basic at best.

3yr
VenomousTv
VenomousTvLv15

After reading the description I'm very hyped to read it and I hope it won't get dropped untill chapter 300+ .

3yr
shayon
shayonLv14

Gwen is less inteligent than the original and grandpa Max is also lot more less vigilance than the original.ashley's character is not interesting

3yr
Meharu
MeharuLv13

Idea behind this story is good but in my humble and personal opinion it's gone the wrong way starting from the chap 2 and it became something 谋 can't read (it's my opinion of course there will be people that like this book but it's not my cup of tea)

3yr
Sok_Heng_8897
Sok_Heng_8897Lv4

great story don't drop it please 馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃檹馃檹馃檹馃檹馃檹馃檹馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ馃ズ

3yr
EXPchaos
EXPchaosLv5

Good story development so far but I think a little more character interaction is needed. Otherwise it's going brilliantly. 馃榿馃榿馃榿馃榿馃榿馃憤馃憤馃憤 [img=recommend]

3yr
One_Azure
One_AzureLv1

Idk man just so many grammar errors and inconsistencies. I really can't stand this novel but I'm glad you're happy to write it as I'm an old Ben 10 fan. Maybe just re-read it and fix the spelling and grammar mistakes.

2yr
Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Uzumaki_Kushina_21Lv5

it's just plain it is like you are writing an essay on some topic or writing an exam 馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕

3yr
ShuYme
ShuYmeLv5

A frankly boRing story with some of the worst grammar i have ever seen. Just putting the raws or whatever in google translate would probably be better and if this is not A translation ooof because The graMmar and structuring is appaling

3yr
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