character design really drags this story down. its not written poorly, but.. just the premise is too bad for the story to hold weight. the mc is given the most ridiculous advantages, but still acts like he deserves/earnt his strength. he has every element affinity, can takes anyone's kekkai genkai, has a tailed beast, all while being 10 years old. its set up to make the mc a god (literally). its just too much for it to be interesting/fulfilling. he beats the sannin at 10 years old.
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Exactly that;s why i dropped. Besides the story will auto killed itself as it goes on since MC is too godlike at start, so there will be no story or plotline at all. Any other plotline involving Madara later on will sounds too forced now. That's why most completed op stories keeps their number of chapters below 50, because there is nothing to write afterwards. One way the story could have been better: MC could have started with Explosion release since its a native kekkei Genkai. Nothing is suspicious. MC develops it. Author could be creative, develop new techniques derived from the kekkei genkai. MC could train his physique like MIght Gai (not copying his Eight inner Gate technique, i don't like copy cat MC, you are in naruto make your own mark in the world). Like try to develop body flicker (MC can have knowledge from other anime). Like try to develop flash step with physical force only, develop soru from one piece, combine them with body flicker and even add chakra nature to the body flicker to surpass and make shisui's body flicker pale compare to you. The develop punches combine with you explosive release to surpass even tsunade's punch. Later on learn all sort of sage art. Keeps finding innovative way to surpass those at the top. why run after all kekkei genkai like a retard and copy others jutsu? its just boring
