Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Fall For You Again (HIATUS)

The writing quality seems decent, I don't see spelling issues. The formatting throws me off a bit. The updates seem steady and the development is good. The characters are interesting but I'd like to know what they look like (especially in a Romance story). I'd also like to know more about what their surrounding environment looks like. Description about what it feels like to stand outside in the cold or heat is also nice (description of feelings). With that being said, it's a fun read.