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2022-01-08 09:36

the few problem s I have with this story is one he has a lot of missing words or thing change in the middle of a paragraph like " he slashed with his sword. he priced with the knife two he skipped words making it confusing three some of the title don't have to do with the novel for a chapter or two than on part 3 the title makes sense fore he does not use his system he stacks up like hundreds of points and does not use them and just does not have hp for some reason other than that it's a fine book

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