A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing. I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it? How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story? What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me. What I would have been interested in, 1- His devil side 2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc 3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town) 4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed) 5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil. 6 - etc... Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way. Writing Quality - 4 Stability of Updates - 5 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 3 The total score - 3.2
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Thank you fellow Daoist for your wonderful review!
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei:Thank you fellow Daoist for your wonderful review!
thankful I saw this review and skipped to the part where the mc was just making himself out to be a cuck so I know to drop this. Author good luck but this type of mc is not one I want to read about.
I agree but I hate the low key part
Thank god I read this .
Also the author has changed the MCs character a few times, at first he decided to be a devil dual cultivator with few ties, then the author decided to get rid of that. Before he said he would kill a girl if she betrayed him and slept with someone else, then the author changed it to if the MC isn't pleasuring her it is his own fault and if he is he would just peacefully break up with them with. So the author just can't decide how he wants his MC to be and changes him to fit the current situation. The changes I mentioned was when he decided to add the woman who slept with every man in the continent including their livestock and pets. Really seems like he is contemplating adding NTR based on that alone.
