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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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2021-11-30 00:52

Hello, everyone! I welcome you to read my new book. Here, I won't spoil anything but if you are looking for Dual Cultivation, Devil Cultivation, and Sword Cultivation. Then, this book might be just for you. Click the synopsis to join my discord.

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BRAGO
BRAGOLv1

is it dark cause I love to read antagonist and dark stories.

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

I wouldn't call this dark. But, you can read the first 40 chapters to understand more.

BRAGO:is it dark cause I love to read antagonist and dark stories.
Hussain_Khalifa
Hussain_KhalifaLv15

Romance?

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Yes, it does have romance.

Hussain_Khalifa:Romance?
VashuRajput269
VashuRajput269Lv14

is this novel better than you earlier ones?

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:Yes, it does have romance.
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Yes, in terms of plot, pacing, and character, this is better than Yin-Yang Harmony System

VashuRajput269:is this novel better than you earlier ones?
Senpai_God
Senpai_GodLv3

will he bang claire? idc if she got another man. I don't mind spoilers just tell me yes or no. Pls tell me he does!

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I wouldn't call this dark. But, you can read the first 40 chapters to understand more.
Lucifer_Starfall
Lucifer_StarfallLv4

dose the mc have chance with the women in that realm or she gone stay as his sister

Immortal3258
Immortal3258Lv3

Mmmm

BRAGO:is it dark cause I love to read antagonist and dark stories.
peace01
peace01Lv1

Does the writing quality improve overtime... I just started, and I've seen some really bad ones recently... so I'm just going to ask, does it improve?

Envyous_098
Envyous_098Lv4

is the mc have a HUGE harem(more than like 6 or 8 womens)?

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Yeah

Envyous_098:is the mc have a HUGE harem(more than like 6 or 8 womens)?
Aree_Doski_5524
Aree_Doski_5524Lv1

Good novel

Mudit_Tibrewal
Mudit_TibrewalLv2

It is the sequel of Yin Yang Harmony System?So will he meet jenny and other girls or only new girls will be there?

Ancient_Rebel
Ancient_RebelLv12

is it dropped?

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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

This is my second review after a month with over 100 chapters. Writing a hundred chapters in a month is quite hard but thankfully, I pulled it off. Now, I don't want to talk too much on why you should read this story. But, there are some things that I would like to highlight. You will get antagonists but you won't get many devilish, evil villains. There will many challengers that keeps on improving at the same pace as the main character. It is a novel with three core tropes; Dual Cultivation, Devil Cultivation and Sword Cultivation. Dual Cultivation- You will find it constantly in the story and with different kinds of female. Remember, everything is just a fiction so I will be writing anything I want to no matter how absurd it might be. Devil Cultivation- It takes off a slow start but it has a bigger plot in it. And if you read the book properly you will find why. Sword Cultivation- It is the main focus of the story and the main plot where the story revolves. And, there are some mysteries for many readers regarding some characters, some events, some places, so please calm down and if you don't understand anything, just wait for future chapters. The writing quality is not too good but not too bad either. Updates stability is something I will try to keep up with 3 chapters per day. Story Development will be on focus when the world background expands. As for the character design, I believe you can understand more on them after reading like literally hundreds of chapters. Because, each one of them has a certain goal, certain motivation and certain personality. Give the free chapters a try in free time and if you like it, continue, if you don't then you can drop it.

DaoistglcrYM
DaoistglcrYMLv3

A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing. I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it? How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story? What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me. What I would have been interested in, 1- His devil side 2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc 3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town) 4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed) 5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil. 6 - etc... Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way. Writing Quality - 4 Stability of Updates - 5 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 3 The total score - 3.2

AdonisV
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