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Review Detail of Pclerk in Incomplete System in Marvel

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The writing has great quality and very few mistakes here and there. It’s very easy to understand. Stability of updates changes from time to time, but that’s life. Story development and character design are there but they are lacking. The characters all appear to be very basic and not thought out. The storyline seems very unplanned and has no current route. The world is still being built and more characters are being introduced, again though, not much to them. Good for a quick read and when direction is determined could use a rewrite.

Incomplete System in Marvel

Chaostic

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Thank you for the review. There is alot i have learned about planing the story and characters throughout writing so im hoping whenever I finish this and move onto my next story the mistakes I made here can be fixed.