Mc just acts like he is a anime character. His Sister misunderstoods him but he doesnt even have balls to defend himself properly. He is just like the exact copy of shidou and a pushover. I wanted a New taste but what I found is no different than anime. If I wanted to read the original Series, I would've went to another site for it.
Demigod_of_All
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LIKEDemigod_of_All:I can understand. My bad for creating such a horrible character.
No, it's fine. You're not wrong. I was just a beginner back then, so I didn't have much experience in this. Well, I have already planned to rewrite my fanfic to a better version. If you're interested, then I'll inform you when I'll do so. Thanks.
The_Puffer:The guilt trip... Now I feel bad for writing such a harsh review...
Demigod_of_All:No, it's fine. You're not wrong. I was just a beginner back then, so I didn't have much experience in this. Well, I have already planned to rewrite my fanfic to a better version. If you're interested, then I'll inform you when I'll do so. Thanks.
The_Puffer:Please do inform me when you do it. And add some balls to mc will ya.
si por favor, recuerdo cuando se mostró un trozo del futuro de el en otra linea de tiempo y a pesar de saber lo que paso ni siquiera se enojo(aunque decidió ser mas fuerte, creo) bro, cualquiera estaría enojado en su situación.
Demigod_of_All:Yes, sure.
Demigod_of_All:No, it's fine. You're not wrong. I was just a beginner back then, so I didn't have much experience in this. Well, I have already planned to rewrite my fanfic to a better version. If you're interested, then I'll inform you when I'll do so. Thanks.
Bueno, planeo escribirlo desde el comienzo de la serie esta vez. Los personajes serán los mismos. Pero su desarrollo definitivamente será mejor que antes. Y además, jeje, la trama esta vez será genial.
DaoistKWbwbE:como planeas reescribirlo, mejor desarrollo de personajes, trama o que?image
Well, the rewritten chapter is out. But sigh. The update might be slow this time due to some personal reasons. But it'll continue for sure. Haha.
The_Puffer:Please do inform me when you do it. And add some balls to mc will ya.
Demigod_of_All:Well, the rewritten chapter is out. But sigh. The update might be slow this time due to some personal reasons. But it'll continue for sure. Haha.