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DefinitelyNotACat
DefinitelyNotACatLv42yr
2022-05-23 19:51

Good read, until it becomes a harem, as always. I wonder why having meaningful interactions with one girl and having a special relationship is so rare on webnovel. Lets just have mediocre and forced intersctions left and right with girls that forgot what self rrspect is yaaaay!

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AbsurdReader
AbsurdReaderLv2

And it's a five? Eh?

DefinitelyNotACat
DefinitelyNotACatLv4

i cant just give 1 star just because it is an harem and an harem will always ruin the story. So instead i just give 5 stars becaus creation is hard

AbsurdReader:And it's a five? Eh?
AbsurdReader
AbsurdReaderLv2

Oh um, I was not implying that it should be 1 star bro. Sorry for the misunderstanding and I am not those no-harem fanatics nor the harem fanatics one just to be sure. No offense aside, r u those guys who just reviews 1 star and 5 star rating all around WN?

DefinitelyNotACat:i cant just give 1 star just because it is an harem and an harem will always ruin the story. So instead i just give 5 stars becaus creation is hard
DefinitelyNotACat
DefinitelyNotACatLv4

no not really, when it comes to harem i only give 5 while ranting about the fact that yet again another story is ruined. When i vote normal fictiona im much more ibjective

AbsurdReader:Oh um, I was not implying that it should be 1 star bro. Sorry for the misunderstanding and I am not those no-harem fanatics nor the harem fanatics one just to be sure. No offense aside, r u those guys who just reviews 1 star and 5 star rating all around WN?
Aizen_81
Aizen_81Lv1

Perhaps because the simple reader will not get bored of watching if he is a harem, at the end of creating an interesting dialogue of 100 chapters between two characters is something that requires a great writer, and it is also impossible to ask for a normal relationship in an anime like high school dxd

DefinitelyNotACat
DefinitelyNotACatLv4

it has already been done by others, so it IS possible. And just becaue you may find it not possible it is not like a harem is the solution. Considering that harems arent really possible anyways.

Aizen_81:Perhaps because the simple reader will not get bored of watching if he is a harem, at the end of creating an interesting dialogue of 100 chapters between two characters is something that requires a great writer, and it is also impossible to ask for a normal relationship in an anime like high school dxd
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