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2022-05-03 05:25

Top 3 FF i have read of Date a live. THe grammar is really good, except for some typos and wrong verbs here and there but aside from that and other minion issues its solid. The most interesting thing is that the FF takes place at the END of date a live, first time EVER i read a FF that starts at the end, if not the only one to be written. So all the girls are already former spirits, (though i hope they all regain their powers like Kurumi, cause, you know, powerful waifus are the best), going to college and the story takes place from there. I Ship the MC to Kurumi, Two OC, Yuzuru, Kaguya and Nia, as for shido? Origami should step up, give him a strong viagra or aphrodisiac, seal the door, wear a very êrôṭîc outfit and jump him with Tohka (who origami convinced to join), Kotori might peep them the first time and join later. (Do write that chapter). Bet Shido will have waist pains and Origami will be glowing next day lol

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This DAL fanfic is sure interesting...also Kurumi as the main heroine for the story! Kudos for that! Now let's get on an actual review. Writing Quality: 4/5 Pretty good actually. There are only few errors here and there. However, sometimes there are cringe lines you know? Kinda bugging me but well, overall, the writing style is kinda decent! Story Development: 3/5 At first it was okay, I can still follow it quite well. Many things don't add up like the fact Kurumi began to like the MC despite from what Kurumi had gone through for Shido. However, this is quite understandable, this is after all, a FANFIC. Unreasonable things are the norm haha. Setting that thing aside. As the chapters progressed, the story Development seemed to get bumpy and weird(?)...at least, on my opinion, please respect it. Character Design: 3/5 Yup, the OG DAL characters somewhat retain there personalities... is what I would like to say despite some of their unreasonable actions in the early parts, but it is still readable nonetheless. However, the MC... he's not the greatest but also not the worst. Undoubtedly though, many would agree with me if someone said that Sajru was acting like a simp, ugh. Updating Stability: 5/5 No more things to add. This is it. World Background: 4/5 Nothing much notable unless for the fact that this happens after the main events of DAL. It is interesting though, ngl. Overall: 3.6 An average novel in my opinion. Usually, I drop fics like this by I see potential you know? I hope this will improve further as I continue to read this story! It's quite rare to find some decent DAL fanfic with fast updates after all!

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