Review Detail of TheSpixa in Moved/Dropped

Wow, what an amazing read! This book is truly a ‘munchable’ read. However as an avid reader, here are my opinions on it! Negative; Taking into consideration that the author is not a monolingual , I do understand certain struggles with writing in english. As a fellow non-monolingual, I too have struggled writing in english. It reflects in my vocabulary and grammar. But not to worry, author! You can always use writing and editing softwares to support your work. Certain errors in your writing would include unnecessary “!”, “immediately”, “suddenly” etc. I’d advise against the use of the last two as it makes your writing choppy >_< ! I don’t know whether this is considered feedback or just my personal taste but, to a certain extent, the characters seem a little shallow. However, taking into fact that there are only 13 chapters, that may explain their choice of characterisation. Positive; The plot is definitely an interesting one. Truly, I’ve never heard of a story centering a ‘God’ descending to humankind. Not a lot of authors can handle writing something so unprecedented and unique but this author really knows his stuff! He has brought forth an idea, blooming it into a special story. Something I bet his readers too can agree on. The author too, pays extra attention to details in his story. The transition of the pronoun change in addressing the main character, from “it” to “him”, matches the transition of the protagonist from “God” to man. Furthermore, the author understands his readers. He has promised quality weekly chapters; an example I’m sure other authors are trying to follow. At last, those were the opinions of the author's story. It was a splendid story by the author. Keep up the good work ! :))