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2022-03-28 13:06

The story literally starts at chapter 14, the system is interesting, but literally 80% of the writing it other unnamed random character re explaining what just happened 3-5 times, or random characters pitying, or judging, or chattering 7-8 times, fr its constant, so unbearable I really hope this doesn't get picked

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