Review Detail of in Stepmother: I Am Asked To Give A Kidney To My Half-Brother

Has potential but unfortunately it's wasted. The author skips through time multiple times during the chapter, sometimes right in the middle of an ongoing scene. They only focus on either the face slapping or system. The MC gains 51% of the company and then working a chapter he's driving to the company in a luxurious sports car. Nothing in between. This comes off more like an outline than an actual story. Needs serious work.