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Master_of_Sleep
Master_of_SleepLv152yr
2022-02-13 06:07

I don't know who the people rating this with 5 stars are, because this is a terrible story, I imagine if it was translated well, it would still only be a slightly smaller trash fire. Even if the MC was a compelling character, there are no good foils, no-one acts realistically, they are either cartoon bad guys with no foresight who seem to hold a death grudge with the MC, or fawning yes-men who believe MC is omniscient, and omnipotent. considering the title is also the inciting incident, I'm not sure how the author will stretch this book to have any meaningful incidents for much past where it is when he will probably conquer the world and be the lord high supercallifragilisticexpialidocious supreme ultra mega commander of the Mary Sue Earth Kingdom

Stepmother: I Am Asked To Give A Kidney To My Half-Brother

Wind's Mark
3.4
510 Chs

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ReaderLens
ReaderLensLv4

The system abilities are too broken to be realized even in a fantasy world. Also, our Mc is kinda foolish to indulge in banter against his half brother when he can simply offer bounty on dark web. Such childish fights remind me of palace harem dramas and female mc stories. This doesn't suite our male Mc at all.

3yr

Radioactive_Noodle
Radioactive_NoodleLv3

just from the synopsis you know this is gonna be Typical young master face slaping with no story or plot whatsoever he probably wont even do anything interesting

3yr
AlEl
AlElLv15

the MC should be very good in multiple choice 🤣🤣🤣 it will full of slaping face (hard) scenes. just hope for the best from author, 😎😎😎😎

3yr
1996611q
1996611qLv12

Sinopsis sounds great until you actually reads it, it’s garbage full of face slapping. enemies suddenly crawling out from some corner and going after the MC.

2yr
TurkeySandwich
TurkeySandwichLv15

Good premise, how ever terrible..... well, everything else. Characters are so 1 dimensional. That everyone that's not on the side of the main character is a bad person. There's no logic to how the main character gets his rewards, it just shows up, blatant plot armor, which I find is just terrible story telling. World building is terrible, like it doesn't tell me if the company that the main character just happens to fall in his lap is suppose to bigger, smaller, or equal to the power of his father/mother-in-law company/family. Story is terrible written, only a good read if you're in a brainless mood.

2yr
akirakunz
akirakunzLv4

This is trash. The system is the only ok tier aspect of this novel. The author have no life experience or made no effort when writting this novel because everything sound childish, illogical or would be dangerous to do in real life. Other than those scene that wouldn't happen in real life there is only badly written faceslap scenes.

3yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

another trash face slapping novel with an enemy who wont die so the mc can face slap him all the time, and it was even an editors picked seriously? is the taste of the editor so low

2yr
SixSamsara
SixSamsaraLv5

Meh..................................................................................................................................................

2yr
Doesnot_matter
Doesnot_matterLv4

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3yr
healMeSave_me
healMeSave_meLv6

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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