webnovel
Pratap_Ji
Pratap_JiLv121yr
2023-10-10 14:33

Hey bro why are you not uploading. You got us addicted and now not uploading any chapters you have to compensate us with daily chapters × 5.

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Abiskar
AbiskarLv4

i read 300 chaps so lemme give the guys who want .to read or read some chapters only & author a honest review first of all the story is good no face slapping young master can be a good read & some time it's little boring but not to a huge amount . pros- 1.no face slapping 2. no fight without reason 3.speed cultivation 4.not simp for girls( only loves 1 & want to marry her) cons- 1.to much excessive info some place & some place lack of info 2.constaly taking mc in past ,future, in some person body in place to just see thing bluhh bluhh... & excessive amout of chapter for this type of area where you'll get bored 3.i domn'tif it's a con or anything but it's kinda messed up so mc this'd MC's third life so this life & previous life had half his soul so he can't cultivate but this life & his previous life's soul fused after his previous life self died & awakened a system coz it's actually a same soul but somehow or mc planned to spread in two after 1 died it fused with other half ,the reason behind is i guess coz MC's previous previous life was .a strong person with supreme undying soul so he did it but in that life his life wasn't easy coz his parents were the strongest person on that universe (in universe there's million& billions of galaxy & in a galaxy there's billions of worlds)& his name also was Alex white but some reason at baby state he was poisoned by universes strongest posion by a super powerful enemy & his father used his cultivation & mother used half of his to suppress it but u have to know after being posioned by that posion even the universe strongest can live upto 3 day but he didn't died coz not of his parents sacrifice but bcoz he has supreme undying soul so his parents sacrifice was meaningless this type of blah blah it's kinda good but boring too that's what I felt 4.author isn't solving a single mystery but constantly putting more mystery so i felt bored 5. super fast cultivation, even you have full of treasure you need time to cultivate even if u use some universe's strongest cultivation techniques but his cultivation speed over the top & un imaginable 6. they're forcing things on mc to make the stroy more vast like if uread the frost moon emperor part it's totally meaningless to do that that doesn't even need to be done 7.same plot mc go from small to big area even if it's better place mc come to know it's the worst part of that are blahh blahh 8. constantly fortuneous encounter for no reason just forced 9.too much explanation & talk for no reason 10.new characters & their perspective seems boring ( i like side charcters perspective but here it's boring ) 11. full of unsolved mystery not a single one solved but more are being added you can read it it's good better than average xianxia just skip thos unimportant part overall good read

Arjuna_9237
Arjuna_9237Lv11
Related Stories

An Extra’s Rise in an Eroge

Arthur, an avid gamer, accepts his friend’s dare to beat an infamous eroge game that no one has ever completed. The problem? The game is designed to trap players in endless smut scenes, with every decision leading to the same outcome: more smut scenes, world destruction and game over. After countless failed attempts and growing frustration, Arthur takes to the game's community forum, venting his anger at the developers. To his shock, he receives a cryptic response from the developer challenging him to find a different ending. Moments later, Arthur is pulled into the game itself, awakening in the body of an unremarkable extra. Arthur finds himself embodying the very lifestyle he once despised—fooling around at every turn and getting swept up in the woman's seductive temptations. Can Arthur resist the game’s temptations, uncover hidden paths, and finally break free? Or will he become yet another player lost to its endless scenes? or he will do both? Follow Arthur’s journey for a fresh story filled with humor, plot twists, and concepts you won’t find elsewhere. This novel includes incest, so if that's something you're uncomfortable with, you may want to avoid it. [Warning: Mature content R-18 ] Tags:- Harem, Op Mc, smut, romance, Milfs, Virgins, Netori, Succubus, Vampires, Elves, Princesses, Gilfs, Demonesses, Angels, Goddesses, Dragons, Phoenixes, Dryads, long seggs scenes, System, and many more. Release Schedule & Support: Chapter Releases: 2 daily chapters, each with 1k+ words. Support & Bonuses: I'm newly contracted and part of the win-win program! Privilege purchases, gifts, golden tickets, power stones, collections, and especially comments are greatly appreciated and keep me motivated. Give this a try—it’s a story that promises surprises at every turn, as long as you make it through the beginning!

Sensual_Sage · Fantasy
4.3
233 Chs

The Runic Alchemist

Ben, a postgraduate chemistry student, envisions a future where science unlocks the secrets of the universe. But fate has other plans. In a sudden twist, Ben dies and awakens in a strange new world, reborn as a five-year-old boy named Damian Sunblade. Damian's joy at being part of a noble family is short-lived. His family, valuing gold over blood, sells him off to another noble house to be groomed as a homemaker husband, a mere pawn in their political games. Struggling with his new reality and the remnants of his past life’s knowledge, Damian refuses to succumb to his fate. In his new household, Damian discovers that this world is governed by magic circles, Runic symbols wielding immense power. Driven by his scientific curiosity, Damian begins to experiment. Applying the laws of physics to the Rune symbols, he deciphers their secrets and invents his own unique form of magic. However, The family that bought him has their own plans for him, seeing Damian as a valuable tool to enhance their power. But Damian, ever the independent spirit, has dreams beyond servitude. He longs for freedom, a place to call his own—a life where he can use his talents without restraint. And so Damian devises a daring plan to escape. His journey is fraught with danger and intrigue, as he navigates a world filled with mystical creatures, powerful adversaries, and ancient secrets. Along the way, he forges alliances and battles enemies, all while refining his magical and scientific skills. In "The Runic Alchemist," follow Damian Sunblade’s epic quest for independence and self-discovery. Witness his transformation from a forsaken child to a formidable Alchemist, determined to carve out an extraordinary future for himself in a world teeming with infinite possibilities. ***** Author Note : Hello! GlaringError here! As I have already mentioned in my author review I am restating it here since I am getting tons of comments about it, that I am more of a reader myself than a writer, I made this novel in an attempt to capture my fantasy world residing in my mind into words.. Writing is new for me.. The premise of my novel is inspired by many great works that I have loved over the years. And some elements I have in my novel that are slightly similar to them but it's just the skeleton of it, the real meat of the plot is entirely my own cooking. Some of the influence that is more noticeable is from The Runesmith (By Kuropon), The King's Avatar (By Butterfly Blue) and Shadow Slave (By Guiltythree). I have immense respect for these legends and I can only hope to follow in their footsteps. To all those who comment just by judging the name, at least give it a chance before letting your opinions be known. Thank you.

GlaringError · Fantasy
4.3
615 Chs

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

[ Congratulations on receiving the following Unique Skills: – Appraisal (Basic) – Skill Absorption (Mythic) – Universal Synthesis (Ultimate) ] _____________________________________ "Synthesis Skills: Swift Sword Strike + Fire Toad's Breath." [ Ding! ] [ Congratulations! Your Skill Synthesis was successful ] [ Your skills evolved into: Azula Sword Strike ] "Synthesis Materials: Titanium Runic Sword + Wyvern Bones" [ Congratulations! You Synthesis was successful. Your Sword has evolved into Skeletal Dragon Sword ] _________________________________ In a heart-wrenching tale of loneliness and despair, Ethan's life has been one of unending tragedy. Orphaned at a young age and tormented by a relentless terminal illness, he spent his final days confined to a cold, confined hospital room. As he takes his last breath, he awakened in a mysterious void, where Ethan is given the opportunity to choose three unique skills that will define his new existence. With millions of options but only three choices, he carefully selects his path, setting the stage for an extraordinary journey of Reincarnation. Reincarnated into a fantastical world filled with magical Skills, powerful beings, and untold dangers, Ethan must navigate his new life, wielding the skills he chose to survive and thrive in a realm where anything is possible. But the question remains: Will this second life bring him the happiness and purpose he was denied in his first, or will it lead him down an even darker path? Chapter release: 2 chs/day Guys, its my first time writing, and it might not suit everyone. I can only say sorry in advance. Thanks for reading!

Elias_Nightwalker · Fantasy
4.4
467 Chs