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Review Detail of Heavenly_Raven in Realistic Tower of God: The Martial Way

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Heavenly_Raven
Heavenly_RavenAuthor2yrHeavenly_Raven

Hello, Author here. This is my first work so I hope I can learn and improve a lot by working on it. If you have any criticism or suggestion about the story you can tell me here. I'll do my best to work on them and improve the story. Anyway, on the story itself, as I have tagged, it focuses on the adventure and action aspects. I want to write a nice adventure in the Tales Uzer Universe, specifically inside the tower of god with a way different main character and casts than what's on the Manhwa. Maybe there's little romance? I don't know yet but even if there's romance, it will amount very little so I didn't tag it. You see here, Liu Guanyi, the MC, has a way different mindset and character than Bam, a naive and kind kid. Unlike Bam when he goes inside the tower clueless of everything, here, Liu Guanyi has his own plans and ambitions. Anyway, that's enough I think so I hope you guys give it a shot, it means a lot to me, thank you!

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Realistic Tower of God: The Martial Way

Heavenly_Raven

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Lumpish_Haggard
Lumpish_HaggardLv12Lumpish_Haggard

Keep it Villain/Evil and you're golden. Don't really like authors changing the character of the MC because of some criticism they receive in comments/reviews.

Heavenly_Raven:More of a villain I guess, I put the antihero tag since I have seen a lot of writers use both tags at the same time so I thought it didn't hurt to make the tag longer since the tags are pretty limited (I can only choose from around dozens of tags so I didn't really find all the tags I want).
leo26
leo26Lv11leo26

So can you tell me is he a villan or an anti hero, they are different so you can't call both of them being the same.

Heavenly_Raven
Heavenly_RavenAuthorHeavenly_Raven

More of a villain I guess, I put the antihero tag since I have seen a lot of writers use both tags at the same time so I thought it didn't hurt to make the tag longer since the tags are pretty limited (I can only choose from around dozens of tags so I didn't really find all the tags I want).

leo26:So can you tell me is he a villan or an anti hero, they are different so you can't call both of them being the same.
Venerable_Of_Stars
Venerable_Of_StarsLv12Venerable_Of_Stars

do you have a discord or something for novel discussion?

Dino_Read
Dino_ReadLv1Dino_Read

why you put reverend insanity's cover tho? ;-; nevermind, I guess its fine.Theres not really bad intentions anyways.

Heavenly_Raven
Heavenly_RavenAuthorHeavenly_Raven

Because it's cool. When you look at his back, it's as if you are looking toward a solemn, wise, and great figure.

Dino_Read:why you put reverend insanity's cover tho? ;-; nevermind, I guess its fine.Theres not really bad intentions anyways.
Chaossin
ChaossinLv14Chaossin

Yo bro, come back to your novel. 😭 Lemme know if you dropped it at least 🙏

Lumpish_Haggard:Keep it Villain/Evil and you're golden. Don't really like authors changing the character of the MC because of some criticism they receive in comments/reviews.
MystiGlacier06
MystiGlacier06Lv11MystiGlacier06

do we need to read tower of god to understand this fangic?

Heavenly_Raven:Because it's cool. When you look at his back, it's as if you are looking toward a solemn, wise, and great figure.
theDawg
theDawgLv1theDawg

I hate these people omg

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theDawg
theDawgLv1theDawg

who cares what the author does it's his story he's making, you complain too much

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MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1MAIDENLESS

yeah you are right the novel is free, I dont have the right to complain.

theDawg:who cares what the author does it's his story he's making, you complain too much
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Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4Bakkoy

is there any romance?

Zhao_Madong
Zhao_MadongLv1Zhao_Madong

So far there's no romance. Although the story focuses heavily on one girl, MC manipulates her into his team and he wants to use her as a means to achieve his goal. Hopefully the author doesn't add romance as it ruins MC's indifferent character having full control over emotions.

Bakkoy:is there any romance?
Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4Bakkoy

thanks for the reply, i guess i won't read it because lately i've been bored with sly mc, maybe later when i'm interested again

Zhao_Madong:So far there's no romance. Although the story focuses heavily on one girl, MC manipulates her into his team and he wants to use her as a means to achieve his goal. Hopefully the author doesn't add romance as it ruins MC's indifferent character having full control over emotions.
TheTrickster12
TheTrickster12Lv14TheTrickster12

story is kinda eh the mc still hasn't shown his villainous side yet so kinda bored at chap 10

TheTrickster12
TheTrickster12Lv14TheTrickster12

I skimmed through the chaps yet still felt bored *sigh* quite disappointing for an novel with a villain tag would've expected it to at the very least arouse my interest but no it did the opposite just made me even more uninterested and bored

HypCof_gaming
HypCof_gamingLv13HypCof_gaming

he will stop hiding his strength?

HypCof_gaming
HypCof_gamingLv13HypCof_gaming

he will stop hiding his strength?

HypCof_gaming
HypCof_gamingLv13HypCof_gaming

same

TheTrickster12:I skimmed through the chaps yet still felt bored *sigh* quite disappointing for an novel with a villain tag would've expected it to at the very least arouse my interest but no it did the opposite just made me even more uninterested and bored
Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4Master_Celestial

Pls add romance