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2021-12-11 00:51

I really want Kuro to be with Ino. I like the ship I also like the idea of making him look like Yato. Hope he relates more with the Naruto characters. Hope this doesn’t become harem

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SkyNeves
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Seeing a Good Book turn boring and into a literal info dump but hey let's go to the review. 1-Writing Quality: The book is written well and has only a few spelling and grammar mistakes. So that's already a good thing for me since some love google translation. [4 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: In the beginning it was great, we saw Kuro(MC) Developing nice and interacting more with other people. Since he was learning about his system there was a more "natural" flow of things like getting skills and all. But after he leaves the village... I think even while still in the village his goals turn to become more powerful and that's okay, what ruined the book for me story wise was the fact that things just happened, it became a literal info dump with the MC barely even talking or doing anything. [3 Stars because of the start of the book, the lack of the rest are because of the plot progression] 3-Character Design: Again... Start good, things where detailed and personalities where shown but later most characters become numb or even irrelevant. The MC becomes "OP" but he still is boring because of the plot progression. [3 Stars here shouldn't be a surprise] 4-Updating Stability: We get updates every week, sometimes it was daily, sometimes it was a few times a week and recently I think it lowered. [4 Stars Here... I haven't really been paying attention to this book in a while but I've still read the chapters] 5-World Background: We get details about the background but due to most chapters being info dumps I don't really pay attention to it too much anymore and don't "imagine" it like I usually do on other books, what I mean is mental visualisation. [4 Stars here] Overall:3.6 The story was good, great actually but later it became boring due to lack of decent character interactions, build up to events, lack of hard work or quests that's make it interesting or anything like that. I really used to wait excitedly for new chapters of this book but it died down till I became numb to new chapter releases.

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