Review Detail of Lordfifth14372 in Bro, I'm not an Undead!
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I read close to 200 chapters.. it was a good concept. I felt pacing was bit off, power levels at times doesn't make sense, too many abilities and skills which are rarely used. Also story itself kinda gives dull vibes..it's difficult to connect or immerse urself. ex when reading a novel usually everything, world, characters etc comes together in ur mind vividly as story progress. Here though the world scale is huge, i found it hard to get into. There was lot of anticipation developed but it never really paid off so far. Generally in every novel at the end of every arc/build up there comes a moment where u feel good/satisfied but here it doesn't happen.. it leaves you feeling empty.
Bro, I'm not an Undead!
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I can understand it feeling overwhelming at times, but I honestly did my best to ensure that the large is expanded bit by bit along with its lore. As for the power system, it's actually fleshed out. It's just that it isn't expanded on very much in the first volume, but it may be a bit confusing in the early stages. it's by no means complex
I loved the way you set the different abilities and kinds of powers. Give a pretty good balance to the background story.
Shade_Arjuun:I can understand it feeling overwhelming at times, but I honestly did my best to ensure that the large is expanded bit by bit along with its lore. As for the power system, it's actually fleshed out. It's just that it isn't expanded on very much in the first volume, but it may be a bit confusing in the early stages. it's by no means complex
letnom_99:I loved the way you set the different abilities and kinds of powers. Give a pretty good balance to the background story.