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Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaLv123yr
2022-03-03 06:42

This is actually an amazing story from a different angle. I have read several great one piece stories but never one where the mc joins the revolutionary army. You have done a great job so far and I love your writing style you are truly talented. I still have my fingers crossed that the mc is able to get the Goro Goro no Mi devil fruit for himself as a second fruit. Keep up the great work

One Piece: Revolutionary

xLucqs
4.4
63 Chs

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HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv11

good writing with minimal problems the story is where it takes a total nose dive into the ocean. the author aweful power scaling has the mc losing a fight he should win. along with his awakening of the best haki being a total shame. dude doesnt have the will to awaken it. hes a follower not a king😑 the character is blah typical emo chunni wannabe everything else is good i guess beside his devil fruit being glass glass not shatter shatter unless im stupid and making glass out of nothing and having full controll of it isnt a glass glass fruit😑

3yr

HadouNeji
HadouNejiLv4

This fic is really amazing. I’m not the biggest fan of the revolutionary army, I feel more indifferent for them, so I was a little skeptical of reading it. But in the end I love it. And the fights you do are amazing, while I like the OP Mc, I’m really liking this Mc that can make his fights not be boring. Keep the good job man

3yr
xLucqs
xLucqsAuthor

Typical author plug, thanks for all the support so far on the fanfic, I appreciate it. I will try and post chapters every 1/2 days, though some may be delayed.

3yr
Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663Lv1

Well it's good. But devil fruit is suspicious....I mean it's shatter shatter fruit...how did he made wings out of it.....it's much like white beard's shock shock fruit.....he can literally shatter everything in pieces to micro level.... overall not bad I say but his fruit has so much potential and only thing for now he did was making wings out of it...

3yr
Gabriel_Menard
Gabriel_MenardLv1

Une fanfiction qui commence très bien. Pas de doigts d'or, seulement du travail acharné. L'armée révolutionnaire est un gros plus, la majorité des fanfictions étant des marines ou des pirates. Beaucoup de potentiel et hate de voir la suite

3yr
playboiluffy
playboiluffyLv4

will he become the leader of the revelationary army or just be a member forever?

3yr
Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663Lv1

It's not bad......i like the till now and not much grammar flaws....i just hope it won't stop also not go in harem direction..... overall it's acceptable

3yr
Uchiha_Trump
Uchiha_TrumpLv14

Good story, i hope mc dont became to op soon, need romance has 2 or 3 girl oke but please not large harem ..................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv4

Garbage story from garbage author who has the mind of a toddler and the attention span of a pre schooler. The good thing: He dropped this POS. THe bad thing: He decided to write another POS story that he will also soon drop.

2yr
Dame_Desu_Yo
Dame_Desu_YoLv4

Spoiler alert !! This my honest review, if you want to know more you can see my full review but I alert you in bottom there's some spoiler about MC power. Well this fanfic is good recommend for one piece fan. Mostly ff on one piece is being a marine or pirates it self, but this ff giving a unique perspective on being a Revolution Army. The writing quality is good and in character background story is good too. ........ Spoiler Part! MC power in early story is so cool in my opinion and the potential is high. But sadly author make it kinda deference power. MC devil fruit (Shatter-shatter no Mi) as the name imply it can shatter everything, honestly I think is like Gura-gura no mi. It's gonna be so powerful and terrifying, but there something that make me drop this ff (I drop because it doesn't to my liking anymore) the power make him can shatter the air it self and maybe can shatter the space. But author make him can control glass from the shatter air?? So yeah MC can shatter air and the effect like vergil in DMC 5 (If you know, you know) the air it self shatter like glass, and somehow MC can control that glass ?? I'm like what!!???? It is shatter or glass devil fruit. So yeah that's why I'm dropping this. BUT OVERALL THIS IS GOOD FANFIC IT SELF

2yr
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