Item: One Piece: Revolutionary
Rating: 1
Author: ChangedReviewer

ChangedReviewerLv41yr

2023-03-25 06:55

Garbage story from garbage author who has the mind of a toddler and the attention span of a pre schooler. The good thing: He dropped this POS. THe bad thing: He decided to write another POS story that he will also soon drop.

One Piece: Revolutionary

xLucqs

4.4

63 Chs

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HangerBabyLv10

good writing with minimal problems the story is where it takes a total nose dive into the ocean. the author aweful power scaling has the mc losing a fight he should win. along with his awakening of the best haki being a total shame. dude doesnt have the will to awaken it. hes a follower not a king😑 the character is blah typical emo chunni wannabe everything else is good i guess beside his devil fruit being glass glass not shatter shatter unless im stupid and making glass out of nothing and having full controll of it isnt a glass glass fruit😑

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HadouNejiLv4

This fic is really amazing. I’m not the biggest fan of the revolutionary army, I feel more indifferent for them, so I was a little skeptical of reading it. But in the end I love it. And the fights you do are amazing, while I like the OP Mc, I’m really liking this Mc that can make his fights not be boring. Keep the good job man

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xLucqsAuthor

Typical author plug, thanks for all the support so far on the fanfic, I appreciate it. I will try and post chapters every 1/2 days, though some may be delayed.

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Rajat_Sharma_0663Lv1

Well it's good. But devil fruit is suspicious....I mean it's shatter shatter fruit...how did he made wings out of it.....it's much like white beard's shock shock fruit.....he can literally shatter everything in pieces to micro level.... overall not bad I say but his fruit has so much potential and only thing for now he did was making wings out of it...

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Gabriel_MenardLv1

Une fanfiction qui commence très bien. Pas de doigts d'or, seulement du travail acharné. L'armée révolutionnaire est un gros plus, la majorité des fanfictions étant des marines ou des pirates. Beaucoup de potentiel et hate de voir la suite

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will he become the leader of the revelationary army or just be a member forever?

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It's not bad......i like the till now and not much grammar flaws....i just hope it won't stop also not go in harem direction..... overall it's acceptable

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Good story, i hope mc dont became to op soon, need romance has 2 or 3 girl oke but please not large harem ..................................................................................................................................................................

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