Review Detail of Lunarian_King in The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)
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read up to chapter 41 and the book is worth reading, I really enjoyed it too much that it became one of my favorites in Webnovel now. but please do not make MC gain some powers that are flashy while he is in TWD world, I'd say he can get physical related abilities like Mastery of different kinds of Weapons, Danger Sense, Unarmed Combat(hand-to-hand combat), and things like sprint(fast run), focused Strike, enhanced Perceptions/Senses/, Map, Big Inventory, . . . AND NO FOR Magic/SuperSoldier physique/or some kind of Energy Blast/Bomb/Manipulation/Elemental Manipulation . . . . for now while he is in TWD, it would just ruin the the story in my Opinion. continue the good work and please while you're at it try make chapters longer instead of writing many smoll chapters, pretty please? we like to read long chapters even if it means we get less chapters, I just don't like reading smoll chapters even if there are many of them, so please try make your chapters longer, start with 1000-1500, and you may be able to reach 2000 later on
The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)
Xenon_graves
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AizenJabberwock:All I could take out of this review is: 41 chapters of 2k words each and he's still in the walking dead despite being a gamer? Omg so sloooow..(and probably underpowered) D:
Thanks for your vote of confidence, it means a lot. I made it a general rule not to give him magic in worlds where magic does not exist. So no flashy magic attacks for him. though abilities like Detect Presence are kinda magic abilities, but they're not blantantly obvious so they're okay. I generally aim for 2k words, it takes me around an hour to write if I already have every detail in mind, otherwise it can go up to 2 - 3 hours ( i also get easily distracted atm) thzts why I prefer releasing shorter chapters in smaller intervals. because if I truly wrote the whole chapters as I wanted them to be, this story would only have 4 chapters so far. so It's 4 chapters divided to 40 parts... I will try to write 2k long chapters or 2 x 1k next week, but it won't be a daily release. 10k words/ week is my goal.
Bro I can’ write a single sentence without getting distracted for the next 5 or 10 minutes😂 so the fact ur writing as fast as you are… welp I can only tilt my hat for you
Xenon_graves:Thanks for your vote of confidence, it means a lot. I made it a general rule not to give him magic in worlds where magic does not exist. So no flashy magic attacks for him. though abilities like Detect Presence are kinda magic abilities, but they're not blantantly obvious so they're okay. I generally aim for 2k words, it takes me around an hour to write if I already have every detail in mind, otherwise it can go up to 2 - 3 hours ( i also get easily distracted atm) thzts why I prefer releasing shorter chapters in smaller intervals. because if I truly wrote the whole chapters as I wanted them to be, this story would only have 4 chapters so far. so It's 4 chapters divided to 40 parts... I will try to write 2k long chapters or 2 x 1k next week, but it won't be a daily release. 10k words/ week is my goal.