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DaoistzuVmuaLv13yr
2021-11-29 08:23

thanks for the story please continue with it. I also agree with the system that the mc has since many stories are backed by it, as for the problems of the camp the mc is 16 years old and the adults will not take you seriously even if you are right, unless you give the example and convince them that you are right and that they support you as, the part of the 15 zombies of the pharmacy.

The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)

Xenon_graves
4.6
116 Chs

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Xenon_graves
Xenon_gravesAuthor

This seems to be a bit of a tradition here on Webnovel, so here I am, shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review. This part will help you decide whether you should read this or not. 1- Is this a HAREM story? I understand this is a deal breaker for a lot of people. So I'll avoid wasting your time. I didn't add a HAREM tag because it's not a HAREM story just yet. However, if you are ABSOLUTELY against the very idea of Harems, I suggest you avoid reading this, because as the author I am open to the possibility. However, at no point will this become a story where the MC gets any girl he wants just because he looked their way. I wish to make the interactions as human as possible. Needless to say, with the system, it might tip the scale in his favor. 2- Is the MC OP? At the start? Nope. he is as ordinary as they come. I'm trying to maintain a balance in the story. if he can speed run the world, there is no point in writing about his adventures at all if he's already a god. he will EVENTUALLY be OP, but not right off the bat. 3- Does the MC get wishes? No. If you have more questions, ask me in the comment, I'll give you an answer as soon as I can.

3yr

DraculAlucarD
DraculAlucarDLv5

read up to chapter 41 and the book is worth reading, I really enjoyed it too much that it became one of my favorites in Webnovel now. but please do not make MC gain some powers that are flashy while he is in TWD world, I'd say he can get physical related abilities like Mastery of different kinds of Weapons, Danger Sense, Unarmed Combat(hand-to-hand combat), and things like sprint(fast run), focused Strike, enhanced Perceptions/Senses/, Map, Big Inventory, . . . AND NO FOR Magic/SuperSoldier physique/or some kind of Energy Blast/Bomb/Manipulation/Elemental Manipulation . . . . for now while he is in TWD, it would just ruin the the story in my Opinion. continue the good work and please while you're at it try make chapters longer instead of writing many smoll chapters, pretty please? we like to read long chapters even if it means we get less chapters, I just don't like reading smoll chapters even if there are many of them, so please try make your chapters longer, start with 1000-1500, and you may be able to reach 2000 later on

3yr
yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14

So far so good, the character is fun to read, the characters are true to their originals mind you the small things like Daryl kinda giving off the father figure vibes for his time on "screen", and it's a genuinely good read. Everything else is clean and concise.

3yr
PicoPico
PicoPicoLv2

I dont know now if that just me or others can feel that ... author all what you do is explaining things not telling a good story. ..................................................................................

3yr
Fito
FitoLv5

So far a good story the dialogues feel well constructed and the personalities of the characters seem to fit the situation, it would be better if you gave more space to the other characters and due to the age it would be difficult for him to become a leader like Rick, From the beginning no one takes it serially, maybe Carol or Jacqui adoct it or something ...

3yr
funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv14

okay form my rating you can probably tell I thought this story was bad. but why did I think it was bad? is because this story is just basically The walking Dead series in novel form with an extra character who's name sounds like something out of a cringe 😬 wuxia fantasy story dropped into the middle of America with a gamer system. who add's nothing to the story by existing. and to those who think I didn't give this a chance I read this all the way to chapter 99. also to the untrained eye this might not seem like The walking Dead in novel form. then there's the fact the author tries to design his own gamer system stats from scratch. which ended up with some redundant stats like willpower and endurance. which are the same thing they're just different words to describe it.

3yr
KNGS_PSYCHO
KNGS_PSYCHOLv5

don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't dropdon't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't dropdon't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop don't drop

3yr
DraculAlucarD
DraculAlucarDLv5

The Walking Dead's first Arc is about to end. around chapter 110 by author words at most, next in line is Game of Thrones Arc! hopefully MC is not the son of some lord in Westeros cuz thats overused especially the North. my suggestion is to make MC a normal kid in one of the free cities of Essos, gather group of kids close in age to him, make trainint regimes for them and himself (spartan kind of training) while still working to amass some money, start a small company take on small tasks like getting rid of bandits, or small groups of Dothraki, and grew stronger in few years while develpping their company to become the very best sellsword company in Essos, and since its GoT world, restrictions over magical abilities will be less and he can even have superhuman physical stats too, as for GoT pairing, I can't think of anyone better than Daenerys (together they take over the free cities and later Westeros, after that they deal with the Night King) there is a picture down for his soldiers equipments (weapons/armors) 'their overall appearance':

3yr
Precheur
PrecheurLv5

Well i will stop reading this book for the exact same reason i stopped the serie. Too much talk for nothing, like i'm here to see some people get eaten by zombie, and zombie get smash their head, not to hear some random people talk about their dam life. And this is why this is a good fanfic, i'm gonna stop here.

3yr
Mojo_JOjo
Mojo_JOjoLv4

So far, so good! The writing quality is good, I haven't notice some grammar error so far. For the mean time, all I can say is keep up the good work and proof read whenever there's some error. good job!>

3yr
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