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Fito
FitoLv53yr
2021-11-25 06:15

So far a good story the dialogues feel well constructed and the personalities of the characters seem to fit the situation, it would be better if you gave more space to the other characters and due to the age it would be difficult for him to become a leader like Rick, From the beginning no one takes it serially, maybe Carol or Jacqui adoct it or something ...

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