The story is pretty well written. It's quite fast paced (maybe too fast, I guess personal preference). At 14 chapters wrote it's too soon to make a judgement about the overall quality of the worldbuilding, but it seems promising. One complaint I personally have is that the author should maybe spend a little longer on some of the scenarios. Overall a pretty good start to the novel.
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