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Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv32yr
2022-03-07 12:48

it's total garbage, the mac's personality is constantly changing, between mature, childish, intelligent and naive. Another thing that bothers is the knowledge of the mc, if only he was intelligent it would be fine, but not the mc who would have to have little knowledge knows the same as someone who is about to enter university... The love story between Hiruzen and Orochimaru doesn't make sense since it isn't really used for anything, it would make sense if it was used for Orochimaru to transform Naruto into a "villain" but it doesn't do the opposite...

A Snake's Obsession

Moon_Lord_
4.2
75 Chs

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HankTheFisherMan
HankTheFisherManLv4

I was really enjoying this until i found out hiruzen was sleeping with female orochimaru in her twenties when i just had taking a liking to her

2yr

vtkun
vtkunLv5

if you have permission to post this i applaud you for spreading this awesome fic ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv10

Judt thinking it would have better if naruto ran away from the village it would have been more fitting and made sense since you portrayed it that way in the beginning of the story__________JUST SAYING FROM A READERS POINT OF VIEW

2yr
Gilgamos
GilgamosLv14

Isn’t this the fanfic that was made by a fanfiction.net author called a snakes obsession? Btw do you have permission To post this fanfic on here?

2yr
ErickHenrique_BR
ErickHenrique_BRLv5

I don't know how to feel about the fact that orochimaru had an affair with hiruzen (her teacher)

2yr
ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv3

Author has a used goods fetish, do with that what you wish. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
William_Stewart
William_StewartLv3

Female orochimaru was already taken advantage of by Hiruzen when she was younger. It's a disgusting fetish, and not allowed.

1yr
ManOfCulture69420
ManOfCulture69420Lv4

It was good at start but got kinda bad later on ngl. I don't have a problem with Hiruzen Orochi affair thing really but like other guys said it really isn't used for anything other than sympathy for Orochi.

2yr
Christian_Halcomb
Christian_HalcombLv15

Reveal spoiler

2yr
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