Review Detail of Khaall in My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead
Review detail
Consider this review with a grain of salt. I only read up to Chapter 35. I only write reviews for finished books or books I've dropped permanently. Also- I did the point thing for fun. Writing Quality (2★) - Three points for being comprehensible. Minus one point for punctuation and grammar being less than desirable. Stability of Updates (4★) - Five points for updating frequently from what I can tell. Minus one point because I can't actually tell if this updates frequently, I'm just assuming. [Also update stability is a dumb factor, who cares about it when the story is complete?] Story Development (3★) - Five points for developing the story in a unique way that I didn't see coming. Minus two points because although it was unique, I didn't like it any more than a generic cliche fanfiction. Character Design (1★) - Three points for the character being pretty average and sorta bland. He doesn't do much. Minus two points because he was tricked into impregnating someone and all he did was tell them that it was wrong to trick him, and then cuddled with them. World Background (4★) - Four points because Danmachi fanfiction.
My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead
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quiler:If you didn't read it yet it's a ******MEGA SPOILER***** here: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . He has the power to fuse things and Hestia had him fuse some random ingredients while he wasn't really paying attention to it. Turns out the ingredients can make gods pregnant and he didn't know.
If you didn't read it yet it's a ******MEGA SPOILER***** here: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . He has the power to fuse things and Hestia had him fuse some random ingredients while he wasn't really paying attention to it. Turns out the ingredients can make gods pregnant and he didn't know.
Tokyoghost:what do you mean by tricked into impregnating someone?, please explain
I just finished reading that chapter exactly and decided that's where I'm stopping. I don't see myself enjoying this, it may be great for some other people though. Mc feels too passive, theres nothing special about him, even the weapons he creates seem to be from some game that we are just expected to know about, everything just seems so easy and sometimes out of place. Well, that is just my opinion, I've gotten really picky even with harem novels I like after reading so many of them. In the meantime, I suggest "Aether beasts" here on webnovel for a well developed small harem (currently at least)and "The young master in the shadows" from scribblehub for the great story imo (large harem).
quiler:If you didn't read it yet it's a ******MEGA SPOILER***** here: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . He has the power to fuse things and Hestia had him fuse some random ingredients while he wasn't really paying attention to it. Turns out the ingredients can make gods pregnant and he didn't know.
Thanks for recommending series, I'll check them out. Recommendation for you is Golden Fox with System. It has decent size harem with in depth, likable heroines.
ChatterboxV2:I just finished reading that chapter exactly and decided that's where I'm stopping. I don't see myself enjoying this, it may be great for some other people though. Mc feels too passive, theres nothing special about him, even the weapons he creates seem to be from some game that we are just expected to know about, everything just seems so easy and sometimes out of place. Well, that is just my opinion, I've gotten really picky even with harem novels I like after reading so many of them. In the meantime, I suggest "Aether beasts" here on webnovel for a well developed small harem (currently at least)and "The young master in the shadows" from scribblehub for the great story imo (large harem).