Review Detail of Shika_Kagura in My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead
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So far, the story is good, but the reason I give it three stars is that because the mc is Bell's babysitter, and that's isn't my cup of tea; hence I give it three stars. The grammar isn't bad, I think? there are a few mistakes like using "there" for "theirs" and "you're" for "your." I think the author is confused and couldn't tell the difference between them? Anyway, great story so far, kind of forced romance, but it is what it is. What can I expect from Harem nowadays anyway? a Harem with actual romance development is as rare as I did something good for someone other than me. I'll change my review once he stops babysitting Bell.
My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead
Azazyel
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Idk man, it's been 7 months since the last time I read that FanFic, I need to reared them to give my opinion, btw my current chapter is 274 - confronting ishtar something.
Layios:What d'ya think about Cliche Multiverse? I think this good novel with romance maybe early part is a bit rushed but later it became pretty good.
Shika_Kagura:Idk man, it's been 7 months since the last time I read that FanFic, I need to reared them to give my opinion, btw my current chapter is 274 - confronting ishtar something.
Shika_Kagura:Idk man, it's been 7 months since the last time I read that FanFic, I need to reared them to give my opinion, btw my current chapter is 274 - confronting ishtar something.
Oof it's a shame 'cause it's pretty good. I really like MC flirting with new girls and the goddess from Orario :3
Shika_Kagura:Idk man, it's been 7 months since the last time I read that FanFic, I need to reared them to give my opinion, btw my current chapter is 274 - confronting ishtar something.
It's a meme, from a movie I'm a legend ... now I'm stupid because you didn't understand the joke đ
Shika_Kagura:I'm genuinely confused, who is Fred?
Layios:What d'ya think about Cliche Multiverse? I think this good novel with romance maybe early part is a bit rushed but later it became pretty good.
