any damages? is there no limit? if yes this is a 'bit' too op, imagine tanking a 1-A tier damage, even if only once, its too broken.

Did he do some kind of binding vow if he shouts his technique name it will get stronger?

Not cool, too forced, is there no other way to introduce Uraraka to him? with allat stats and shi but still his feet go limp? gave up? out of nowhere? talk about amazing.

Very good fic, i like it so far, but still, the mc is still far too weak in the grand scheme of things. Still, a good fic nonetheless.

I'm pretty sure loki and the others thought Ser-Veresta are some kind of relic from the previous era. His background is that of "hero" whatever, i forgot.

great story, decent translation. but what irk me the most is the debuff disguised as buff, and how everyone is more impactful than the mc, its great, the format is more or less like OPM, the mc isnt the focus but the difference between the two is that the mc isnt strong, i guess he is strong not overwhelming in term of brute force alone but no technique. In conclusion its great, just the 'buff' is annoying and the mc is more like a strategist and does not directly solve the problem but relying on others to do so. also the romance is annoying so much teaser but no actual progress all the way to the latest chapter as of now which is 169.

I read chapter 1 briefly in this version, different approach at first but still the same, different name too and slightly worse translation? without context you might think the mc is a former slave lol cuz it's written "his former owner" not "this former body owner" or "the original soul" or something like that.

i havent read this one yet but already read the other one, have more chap too than this one by Valrrr, good TL too, anyway in conclusion you should do more research on the platform u want to upload if someone else already did it before actually doing it as to not waste your time, thx for the work tho, appreciate it.

sedikit sulit dimengerti, it almost doesn't make sense, coba thor pakai deepl, gpt, quill bot, grammarly buat benerin penyusunan kata sama grammar nya. for now ill put this on hold.

penulisan mereka berbicara sedikit aneh, gw terbiasa sama yg "blabla blabla" karakter A ngomong apa sambil menggelengkan kepala (disini kau bisa tulis karakter apa ngomong apa sambil ngapain, emosinya apa saat mereka selesai ngomong, senang, kecewa, sedikit kesal atau apalah). Nah di ff ini berbeda, nama karakter, dialog trus pindah ke karakter lain atau lanjut monolog mc atau narasi. kekurangan nya ya itu, nggak eksplor karakter sampingan selain mc, jadi kayak 1 dimensi doang karakter sampingannya, 1 dialog itu intonasi ekspresi nya bisa beda banyak banget, nah karena itu gak ada jadi kesannya ya datar aja.

thx for the chapter, but too much convenience in just a few chapter

hmm...

thx for the chapter

see? i just commented about this "luck" in some paragraph before, it happens again. well it is still tolerable i guess, not too ridiculous.

author trying to justify plot armor isn't a plot armor, i mean what are the odds? from all kinds of places and people in a place where the higher up is a racist person (as of now it only showed as such so i dont take future chapters into consideration) and she only finds the good one till now? i mean its possible, but the chance shouldn't be high, i suppose the ratio should be 60% racist and 40% not, it could be higher or lower for all i know, its only an assumption anyway.

thx dor the chap

what time is dinner time? mine is random, 6 pm at the earliest and 3 am the latest, i just eat whenever i feel hungry, didn't set a time for it, anyway thx for the chap.

thx for the chapter

dang...

interesting so far, but why would she expect them to give her money when the church detest vampire? she might just get banished with nothing, also based on the difference between the statue and the real goddess and what she said about the OG summoning spell being destroyed not aroused her suspicion ? like maybe the church is corrupt or something, but i guess she does suspect something cuz she wants nothing to do with them. anyway thx for the chap.