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_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv53yr
2021-12-06 12:39

Mc is just interested in collecting women. The idea is good but poorly executed and some stuff seems extremely forced but it is a good ream to kill some time. ........... ....... ....... ..... .... ..... ....

The Shadow monarch in Marvel (Solo Leveling x Marvel)

AshburnDz
4.3
45 Chs

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AshburnDz
AshburnDzAuthor

I am just writing for fun . As for collecting womans thingy it's because i tried executing The peerage Idea and what's better then peerage full of women . Although if you could give some advices i would very much appreciated 👍.

3yr
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_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

I understand what you are doing. Keep it up. Eventually you will get better as you get more experience. Don't give up. I recommend you use Grammarly, it is a great grammar correcting app. They say grammar is everything, even the worst story will seem good if the grammar is top notch. Good luck!

AshburnDz:I am just writing for fun . As for collecting womans thingy it's because i tried executing The peerage Idea and what's better then peerage full of women . Although if you could give some advices i would very much appreciated 👍.
3yr
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Claudia_
Claudia_Lv14

I agree with you, when a stories grammar is bad, it just ruins your immersion in the story and just frustrates you.

_oinkchan:I understand what you are doing. Keep it up. Eventually you will get better as you get more experience. Don't give up. I recommend you use Grammarly, it is a great grammar correcting app. They say grammar is everything, even the worst story will seem good if the grammar is top notch. Good luck!
3yr
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haremphobic
haremphobicLv15

Getting a sec chance of life and collecting wemon is dis gusting

3yr
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Edwin00001
Edwin00001Lv4

you forgot #HAREM

AshburnDz:I am just writing for fun . As for collecting womans thingy it's because i tried executing The peerage Idea and what's better then peerage full of women . Although if you could give some advices i would very much appreciated 👍.
3yr
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Adam_Dante
Adam_DanteLv1

Harem is the worst thing, seriously, I've read so many good novels in here that were ruined by the harem element. It's not easy to build up the Mc's character in relation to multiple women, for me a harem must be around 3 women max and there must be a long period of time in between each woman. I have not yet read this novel, but where ever I see a harem tag I skip.

3yr
16
_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.

Adam_Dante:Harem is the worst thing, seriously, I've read so many good novels in here that were ruined by the harem element. It's not easy to build up the Mc's character in relation to multiple women, for me a harem must be around 3 women max and there must be a long period of time in between each woman. I have not yet read this novel, but where ever I see a harem tag I skip.
3yr
2
XBeastz
XBeastzLv3

I am waiting for new chapters oinkchan. I am really enjoying the MC's twisted personality and waiting for MC to use other protagonist as stepping stone and other stuffs, you know. I hope for more updates.

_oinkchan:You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.
3yr
1
Nale_Sheeeeeee
Nale_SheeeeeeeLv4

Shameless plug-in. (It's true tho. Just that the mcs are kinda... questionable?)

_oinkchan:You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.
3yr
breavsing
breavsingLv1

oinkchan supremacy 🙏

_oinkchan:You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.
3yr
Lolisinmyhouse
LolisinmyhouseLv13

....

_oinkchan:You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.
3yr
Urich
UrichLv4

_oinkchan:You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.
3yr
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Dr200
Dr200Lv10

Evil mc?

_oinkchan:You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.
2yr
Dr200
Dr200Lv10

Evil mc?

XBeastz:I am waiting for new chapters oinkchan. I am really enjoying the MC's twisted personality and waiting for MC to use other protagonist as stepping stone and other stuffs, you know. I hope for more updates.
2yr
XBeastz
XBeastzLv3

Nah, just twisted personality. crazy!

Dr200:Evil mc?
2yr
1
Absolute_Qlipoth
Absolute_QlipothLv4

hey oinkchan im a fan of yours

_oinkchan:You just haven't read a good harem novel. Read mine.
2yr
1
_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

and I yours

Absolute_Qlipoth:hey oinkchan im a fan of yours
2yr
1
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Absoluto
AbsolutoLv4

MC is already super powerful, there really isn't a sense in this story beyond collecting women. It could even be a good story but it has several missing points that leave the reader unwilling to read.

3yr

JohnnyReever
JohnnyReeverLv5

The story idea is good. As long as the author doesn’t break the mcs charcter it has good prospects. But I would suggest writing the chapters on google document or using grammarly, or both. Because the amount of spelling mistakes are soon to make it borderline unreadable.

3yr
ImaginarySora
ImaginarySoraLv6

Reveal spoiler

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Arion_Sturmklinge
Arion_SturmklingeLv2

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Makima
MakimaLv4

The concept is good but the writing quality and story development are horrible. You can see the main indicators that this book would be a story only for the author's pleasure is that it went for the romance and harem right away not even giving anything to make us root for the relationship or development between the characters and it seems so forceful too, the mc who is too focused on getting women and is op right away. in my opinion, it had a great concept, but a horrible story

3yr
Walker_of_worlds
Walker_of_worldsLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
AshburnDz
AshburnDzAuthor

Hello there for anyone reading this. I just want to say that I am just a guy who writes for fun and it's my first Fanfic, I don't mind criticism so please do tell me about my The flaws of my story. :)

3yr
Noubu
NoubuLv4

will you continue this book?👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

2yr
xlvlx
xlvlxLv4

A great fanfic. Love the character (A huge fan of solo leveling) and thankfully you made his personality similar to what i think ashborn would have. Tho, he is a little straight forward, i don’t mind the harem but pls don’t pick them up like pokemons. Probably max 10? would be more than enough. (If possible, save some spot for anime waifu’s after endgame if there’s world travel) I also hope that Mc will not intervene in every problem/fight the avengers have. These are just my personal opinions. 🥰 Keep up the good work.

3yr
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