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Walker_of_worldsLv142yr
2022-04-26 20:51

When I saw the title and description of the story I have to say I was excited to say the lease but unfortunately the author did something that many great authors do they insert a charcter into a universe in a way that makes no sense in that universe Im sure u know that the marvel universe has its own powerful cosmic entities that represent something in the universe from the being above all to lady death it just doesn’t make sense for Monarchs and ruler to be there also with the existence of lady death she can rip away control from ashborn is her domain …… then the last thing that bothers me and cause me to drop this is the recreation of the evil pieces from high school dxd like why man why u need to do something dumb like that there’s no need why will the MC even do that above all that this thing is edgy af don’t get me wrong I like me a little edge but jeez this is beyond me dominate this dominate that 😫 like “daddy chill”🤣

The Shadow monarch in Marvel (Solo Leveling x Marvel)

AshburnDz
4.3
45 Chs

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_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

Mc is just interested in collecting women. The idea is good but poorly executed and some stuff seems extremely forced but it is a good ream to kill some time. ........... ....... ....... ..... .... ..... ....

3yr

Absoluto
AbsolutoLv4

MC is already super powerful, there really isn't a sense in this story beyond collecting women. It could even be a good story but it has several missing points that leave the reader unwilling to read.

3yr
JohnnyReever
JohnnyReeverLv5

The story idea is good. As long as the author doesn’t break the mcs charcter it has good prospects. But I would suggest writing the chapters on google document or using grammarly, or both. Because the amount of spelling mistakes are soon to make it borderline unreadable.

3yr
ImaginarySora
ImaginarySoraLv6

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Arion_Sturmklinge
Arion_SturmklingeLv2

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Makima
MakimaLv4

The concept is good but the writing quality and story development are horrible. You can see the main indicators that this book would be a story only for the author's pleasure is that it went for the romance and harem right away not even giving anything to make us root for the relationship or development between the characters and it seems so forceful too, the mc who is too focused on getting women and is op right away. in my opinion, it had a great concept, but a horrible story

2yr
AshburnDz
AshburnDzAuthor

Hello there for anyone reading this. I just want to say that I am just a guy who writes for fun and it's my first Fanfic, I don't mind criticism so please do tell me about my The flaws of my story. :)

2yr
Noubu
NoubuLv4

will you continue this book?👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

2yr
xlvlx
xlvlxLv4

A great fanfic. Love the character (A huge fan of solo leveling) and thankfully you made his personality similar to what i think ashborn would have. Tho, he is a little straight forward, i don’t mind the harem but pls don’t pick them up like pokemons. Probably max 10? would be more than enough. (If possible, save some spot for anime waifu’s after endgame if there’s world travel) I also hope that Mc will not intervene in every problem/fight the avengers have. These are just my personal opinions. 🥰 Keep up the good work.

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